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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.06.24 - 05:47PM Title: Chapter 12 Purging
Please keep this one going……kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks for the input, review/remark. Troublesome or problematic only in my dissatisfaction with the original idea for it. I have since rethinkdacated it. I have it worked out and i will get it done!
/smile
Brian
Reviewer: lschiere Signed Date: 2021.06.23 - 01:40PM Title: Chapter 12 Purging
In _Evolution of Harry's Resolution_ you call the exorcism in this chapter "troubling." What is troubling about it? I pretty much stand by my original review - I love this story, and I hope you return to it. The ritual here seems to flow cleanly from the ritual in the last chapter, and both were set up by the back story given of Harry having learned rituals from the Elder Wand as you described in the first chapter. As I said back in 2018, the real story here is how does Harry reform society, you have all but defeated Riddle, but then it was the events that happened _after_ Riddle that sent him back in time anyway. Preventing rouge followers from causing havoc years latter requires more than just a quicker, cleaner defeat of Riddle, no matter how desirable it is that fewer people die along the way.
In any case, so long as you are writing, there is hope!
Author's Response: Thanks for the input, review/remark. Troublesome or problematic only in my dissatisfaction with the original idea for it. I have since rethinkdacated it. I have it worked out and i will get it done!
/smile
Brian
Reviewer: lschiere Signed Date: 2018.12.04 - 12:36PM Title: Chapter 12 Purging
This is probably my favorite take on a history redo plot line. I really like your introduction of the ritual magic. I'd really like to see this story progress.
You are in line to finish all the horcrux (spelling?) by Christmas. What do you intend for Harry over the break? What becomes of a disembodied Riddle when the last horcrux is destroyed? For that matter, Harry isn't a parselmouth any more, will that cause problems with the locket that cannot now be opened?
Harry and Ginny are still young, what does the future hold for them? Regardless of how you handle Riddle, I imagine you will have to zoom the story lens out some, much like the actual books do where you get a snapshot of a day or two in a row then time transitions into the next month or even season (winter into spring, or glossing over much of the summers).
Harry went back in time in this incarnation because the problems are more wide spread than just Riddle. It was his remaining followers who spur the actual trip back. So as Harry solves the Riddle dilemma, he will need to turn his attention to ensuring that Crabbe & Goyle senior, Macnair, Nott, and Avery are taken care of. Depending on how you handle Riddle, (it looks like you are going to resurrect him using Pettigrew), that might happen all at once, or it might be the work of the next year and a half. If you do in fact use Pettigrew, I imagine you will wait for the TriWizard Tournament, how will that be done without Crouch Jr?
Answering these questions should get you at least through the end of 4th year, if not into 5th year (for Harry) which gives you lots of room to slowly grow Harry and Ginny.
Please don't make this another great start that becomes abandoned! This is getting a lower rating than it really deserves only because it very much looks abandoned.
Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2018.03.18 - 06:32AM Title: Chapter 12 Purging
So glad Harry is Horcrux free now. Anxiously waiting for your next update
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2017.10.26 - 03:31AM Title: Chapter 12 Purging
Progressing right along. I enjoyed the rituals.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.10.21 - 03:52PM Title: Chapter 12 Purging
Very good to know that Harry is free of the bit of Riddle that was stuck in his head!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.10.21 - 12:55PM Title: Chapter 12 Purging
Bit of a wait, but worth it. The story is coming along nicely.
