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Reviewer: jerryfs2 Signed Date: 2016.05.24 - 09:49PM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
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Reviewer: HG Forever9696 Signed Date: 2015.09.13 - 01:01AM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
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Reviewer: Broom Rider Signed Date: 2015.09.02 - 08:25AM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
What a great story? You've done it again. It really is a love story, and it goes beyond Harry and Ginny this time. My favorite part was the letters at the end. That's what friendship is. I watched the "Who's on First" Abbot and Costello video on YouTube. It was great.
Author's Response: I think a new generation is discovering Abbott and Costello. I love YouTube. The letter for the story was a bit of a challenge. I redid it a few times before I was satisfied. It helped end the story on a good note. Thanks for reading--Eric B.
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.08.18 - 05:21AM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
Ah, Spenser always makes me smile! I'd been puzzled as to how anyone could answer this challenge to give a good outcome, so thank you.
Author's Response: This Challenge was...a challenge. The idea for the story came to me when I heard the phrase, "Follow the money." After that, it was just a matter of having some fun. Thanks for reading--Eric B.
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2015.08.17 - 09:44PM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
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Author's Response: Thank you for reading--Eric
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.08.17 - 11:51AM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
I solemnly swear I'm up to no good! As usual, Spense, you've left me on the floor beside my chair laughing my a** off! This one was a real gem! Countcruncher, eh? Good man! Your uncle obivously called in the well known magical accounting firm of Hookem, Snookem and Bilkingsham LTD. If I know Harry and Ginny, they'll continue the family tradition of helping others! You know, after all this time you really outta consider proposing to Luna before Neville or Rolf beat your time! Hope you've recovered from the dungeon and don't smell like Bengay! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Hookem, Snookem, and Bilkingsham, Ltd? Outstanding! Actually, I did "Axlepuff, Butternult, Crayfish, Doubledare, Ernstwyle, Fingersnap, Guldern, Hopperclod, Ingerthud, Jumpclaim, Kleptoe, Lumpenthroat, Miserluver, Numchuck, Overunder, Poopermill, Quitpushin, Raisonberry, Soapblower, Tangotoot, Underover, Vortextile, Weasley, Xasparater, Yukyuk, and Zookisser—Wizards at Law, Ltd.' for another story. The Luna proposal happens in "The Best of Times" (shameless plug). In some of my stories, Rolf is a balding nudist (new context on being a naturalist) with brown teeth and polyester leisure suits. I tend to jump around realities--I'm very kind to Rolf elsewhere. I also pair Neville with an exceptional girl named Rosalynn. Spenser does smell like Bengay still. I smell like sawdust after a long day in the real world--Spenser is NOT based on me. Thank you for reading--Eric B.
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2015.08.16 - 09:44PM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
I just love a good story about financial expenditures. Mr Hemingway didn't even annoy me, too much, with his presence, in this particular story. Go ahead and dry the tear of joy Spence. I told GHL this already, Luna is seeing Jem on the side. When Luma gets into the Wrackspurts she lays down on the couch in the Ravenclaw common room, opens her mouth and sings to Jem. Jem opens her mouth on the other side of the couch, the right side specifically, and sings in a similar stacatto of Ab and C# alternating. Luna will never take your last name Spence. Your name is too...American and feminine. You should consider the name Spencer Lovegood Sails. (Old man and the See referenCe, even though the old man's boat had no sail) you should have some semblance of your Germanic American heritage.
What specifically is the conversion rate of Galleons to Sickle Cells? The American weasels don't account like the British Goblins, except in philosophy and shared Illuminati hierarchy.
There are too many veiled chameleon references to jabber on all day in my review, but I will award you an Acceptable. Mainly for courage AND directness, finally. BTW I picked up a Jay Leno mask at your party for Ginny the other day. I am not sure he is human, or what he does with his bizarre car collection.
Author's Response: It's Hemmingway with two "M's" I make no claim to a relationship for him with the famous author. I grabbed the pen name here off Spenser Avenue and Hemmingway Street, two places I lived as a child. The character Spenser works as a narrator. I will admit that I didn't check Sir Ollivander's references concerning the Galleon/Sickle/Knut conversion rates. Thanks for reading--Eric B.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.08.16 - 03:41PM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
A charming story, which I hope will do well in the Challenge. What I liked about this story is how straight-forward it is and how all of the characters react to the news that they may be getting Knutted and Sickled for items they have never received. Their discovery that the money is being used for a good cause seems to be acceptable to Harry, so that all's well that ends well. Nicely done.
Author's Response: The end-cause of the money is...sort of a separate love story. Friends doing something for friends is good. We are here in this tale for Harry and Ginny (naturally), but maybe we and they care about someone else. It was another fun story to write. Thank you for reading--Eric B.
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2015.08.16 - 09:43AM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
You had me at the title of the story...
Author's Response: I got the idea for the story from an episode of NCIS. Mark Harmon's character Gibbs tells someone to "follow the money." It occurred to me that it could lead somewhere interesting if written correctly. Thanks for reading--Eric B.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.08.16 - 09:14AM Title: Forensic Accounting--A Love Story
well now thats a different way to go...kutgw
Author's Response: I love different (within reason). That's one of the reasons I write AU. In this case I wanted different to move a tad beyond the Harry/Ginny romance while still including it. Thanks for reading--Eric B.
