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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.11.16 - 06:03AM Title: The Beginning of Something Different

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It's time to join your story. I've been planning it for weeks now. However, the first thing I noticed was that I probably should reread TBW before continue reading, lol. That was at the point where I wondered, why Harry doesn't recognize Dudley.
It's a great start to a hopefully great story. I am looking forward to it. The first trouble already seems to be imminent Weasley internally.
I'm glad that I don't have to wait for the next chapter ;-)

Author's Response: Yeah, you definitely have to read TBW first. I hope you enjoy the story!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.08.30 - 09:34AM Title: The Beginning of Something Different

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Enjoyed the start of the sequel.
Loved that they got the better of Dudley.
I think that Charlie has only just found out about Ginny going to America, so he may still change his mind and agree with it. I'm glad Ginny has Bill, the twins and Ron who agree with her leaving.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter. You're right that Charlie is just now hearing about it, but he's not the only one. The twins and Percy are also just now hearing about it, but the twins know exactly how it had been for Harry, which is why they're supportive. And of course, Ron knew, too. He wasn't happy at first but realized it was likely for the best. Hope to have the next chapter up soon. Chapter 6 is flowing fairly easily, surprisingly, so maybe it won't be too terribly long before I update.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.08.22 - 02:49PM Title: The Beginning of Something Different

Ah the kids are starting to make a little work to the end game but the fact that they ran in to Dudley was funny...kutgw

Author's Response: Well, I couldn't very well send Harry to Little Whinging and NOT have him run in to Dudley. Yes, they've begun their practice. It'll start in earnest once the school year starts, though. This is more review for Ginny, to get her closer to Harry's level.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.08.21 - 02:26PM Title: The Beginning of Something Different

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I wonder what will happen in America? A bit different to Hogwarts.

Author's Response: Yeah, it'll be a bit different, but there will be a lot that'll be the same too.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.08.21 - 07:15AM Title: The Beginning of Something Different

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It's great to see you starting your sequel! Nice to see that Malfoy and the others are paying for what they did (it's always fun to see Malfoy get in trouble!). I'm really curios what's going to happen this year to Harry and Ginny, so I'll really be looking forward to reading more of this new story.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's nice when Malfoy gets his, that's for sure. Good to know you're excited to read this one. I hope I live up to your expectations.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.08.21 - 04:43AM Title: The Beginning of Something Different

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You certainly are a good story-teller. It was fun to see Dudley get hauled home for bullying the boy and Harry and Ginny, although Petunia certainly remained in character. I like your character Aisling. I think she's going to be good for Ginny just because she seems to have the same attitude as Fred and George: anything is possible. Looking forward to more of Ginny's summer with and without Harry. Well done.

Author's Response: Well, I'm a bit surprised that you reviewed since you beta'ed this, but I'll take it. Thanks for doing so. As you know, it's always nice to know what worked for somone or what didn't. Dudley definitely needed a swift kick in the pants. There won't be a lot of Aisling, but she does make an appearnace at least once more.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.08.20 - 06:47PM Title: The Beginning of Something Different

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Great start to this story. I am eager to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Glad to see you liked TBW enough to continue with the sequel. Can't say exactly when the next chapter will be up but I hope it won't be too terribly long.



Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2015.08.20 - 05:09PM Title: The Beginning of Something Different

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Great start. Looking forward to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know what you thought. If I get chapter 6 done quickly, then I'll upload chapter 2 within the next month.




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