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Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed
Date: 2017.02.09 - 06:04PM
Title: Freshen the Mind
Good update. I look forward to the next.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2017.02.06 - 05:21PM
Title: Freshen the Mind
Loved the girl time! I have no doubt Ginny needed it. I'm enjoying reading about the little events that make up life at their new school. It is all so very different from Hogwarts. Curious to see how the task will go and what their experiences will be in China. The fear and uncertainty the Weasley family is experiencing must be extraordinary. Hoping for good news for the family soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, Ginny definitely needed the girl time. Glad you are liking life at the new school. I wanted it to be vastly different from Hogwarts, more modern than Hogwarts seems to be. The first task will be the next chapter. Hope you aren't disappointed in it. There will also be good news for the Weasleys.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2017.02.06 - 06:42AM
Title: Freshen the Mind
Very interesting chapter.
Poor Molly. Having to read that article would have really made her feel sad. Rita really has a nasty streak.
Loved the information on Harry's ancestry. It is giving him something he hasn't had up until now...a history.
Looking forward to the first task. Should be interesting to see what the 'pleasant surprise' will be.
Author's Response: Thank you. I have a hard time writing Rita's nastiness so I'm glad you thought it worthy of her. Once JKR released that information on the Potters, I knew I had to include it in some way. Yes, now Harry feels a familial connection to those who came before him. Hope to have the next chapter up soon but no guarantees. I also hope you like the first task.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2017.02.03 - 06:05PM
Title: Freshen the Mind
Well harry has made some improvements for himself but ginny is still going to put her foot down about some things....glad to see harry is thinking about ginny shortly before they left.....kutgw
Author's Response: Yes, she definitely will. She's been a real saint. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2017.02.03 - 10:18AM
Title: Freshen the Mind
Interesting things in this chapter, but I am looking forward to the first task.
Author's Response: Thanks. It's coming soon.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2017.02.03 - 08:14AM
Title: Freshen the Mind
I've been waiting for this chapter to come out here since I received the notice for it on another website. No matter who pens the Rita Skeeter articles, fan fic writers or our favorite author, their half-truths, lies, speculation and downright nastiness make my skin crawl! Your article certainly affected poor Molly as did the man who took such pleasure in torturing her with it. Her courage and determination to drown Harry in treacle tarts made me smile, though.
I'm glad you brought in the new information from Pottermore about Harry's family. I love the conversation between Harry and Chris as well as the discovery of the Deathly Hallows symbol. While Harry doesn't know what it is or what his dream encounter with the spirit truly means, you're giving him nearly three years' head start on gathering information he will need in order to defeat Voldemort. Well done.
By the way, I'm glad Ginny is enjoying her "girl time" with her roommates. That's something she didn't have a t Hogwarts and I think it's doing her a lot of good self-image-wise.
Now on to the first task! Well done.
Author's Response: Yeah, I got busy and forgot to update here as well. Believe it or not, I have a hard time coming up with stuff for Rita's articles, stuff that would be worthy of her nastiness, at any rate. I think Molly will be spoiling Harry for quite some time once she's released. The background on the Potter family was great info so I just had to use it. As for the DH symbol, if Harry had just had some information, he could have acted so much sooner in the books, but then, we wouldn't have had 7 books, either. So, Harry's getting that information early in my story. Ginny definitely deserves some "girl time". I know she tends to spend a lot of her time with Harry, but I wanted her to have her own friends too, an identity away from Harry. Thanks for leaving me more thoughts on the chapter!
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