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Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2019.05.01 - 10:30PM Title: Chapter 10: Full Circle

1. Death Eaters don't call Voldemort "Lord Voldemort" - they call him "My Lord"

2. It's been 15 years and 10 months since Halloween 1981!!



Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2017.06.30 - 11:02AM Title: Chapter 10: Full Circle

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Intriguing story. I'll definitely keep on the lookout for the next installment.

What you need, pre-reading wise, is a Brit picker to help you sort out the British characters' language - and your formatting bugged out.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei

Author's Response: I'm working a 'flashback' Prologue at the moment, should be able to fix it and put it up on fanfiction . net within the next few weeks. Posting on this site may be delayed depending on my beta's availability. Given that I [i]am[/i] British, it's odd that the language is off. Can you give examples? As far as the formatting goes, the html has to be hand-coded and results can be a little inconsistent (I review the coding before I post, but the uploader is a little wonky and sometimes doesn't come out consistently.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.06.15 - 09:44AM Title: Chapter 10: Full Circle

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Good story.
Awaiting the sequel, when available.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.06.11 - 01:25PM Title: Chapter 10: Full Circle

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Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.06.11 - 12:18PM Title: Chapter 10: Full Circle

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Well done!

Don't forget to edit your story to turn on the "Completed" button, so that it's status is reflected as such in SIYE records.






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