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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.11.11 - 07:32AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

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Your version of the Forbidden Forest detention seems to me to be one of the middle-ground versions of the punishment. On the one hand are those writers who make the trip into the forest completely terrifying, while on the other extreme, it's just a nature walk led by Hagrid. You've given us the friendly in Hagrid, but also lent a bit of fear with the confrontation with the Centaurs. Nicely done.

Leave it to Professor Carrow to ruin a perfectly good Hogsmeade visit. He probably convinced Snape to ban her from going to the village the rest of the year because he didn't get to punish her himself, the ruddy creep! I'm glad Ginny managed to get at least one visit in. She seems to have had a good chat with her brothers. I'm looking forward to the wireless broadcast in the next chapter or two.

Well done all around.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! My intention with this fic is to write as closely to canon as possible - I too, have been frustrated with both extremes in other stories. I think they definitely have their place, but personally I prefer a balance. I really hope you enjoy the next chapter! I had a lot of fun writing the broadcast!



Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2015.10.26 - 07:22AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

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Sorry I am late with the review, I was busy :)
Still excellent work. Centaurs were the same jerks as in the canon. It had never occured to me that could be danger with this detentions but I was thinking after this chapter and they were probably the most dangerous creatures in the Forest.
I loved the talk with Kreacher but hoped he would tell more about Harry. He couldn¨t, of course, but I hoped :D
Thank your for your work.

Author's Response: No problem, I've been very busy too! Thank you so much for your continued lovely reviews. They really do mean a lot to me as I'm going through quite a rough patch at the moment. I'm so glad you liked this chapter, hopefully the next one will be finished soon :)



Reviewer: hijadejewell Signed Date: 2015.10.24 - 05:22AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 06:33PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

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Great chapter. Loved the scene with Ginny and her brothers at the pub in Hogsmead. I can easily imagine her parents wanting to check in on her in some way. The part with Hagrid was well written, and clearly showed his frustration with the Centaurs. Looking forward to reading your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You've no idea how much these reviews mean to me :)



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 04:16PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

Really enjoyed this one! Bugbears may stink but the Carrows probably smell worse! All of Hogwarts is dark now not just the forest! Can't wait to see what Snape wants! Can't wait for the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: I'm glad, I had a lot of fun writing this one!



Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 03:58PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

Love reading it from Ginny's point of view.



Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 03:57PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

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Love reading it from Ginny's point of view.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 02:15PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

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An excellent chapter. You are covering all the aspects of the war.... Hogwarts, Grimmauld Place, The Forbidden Forest, Hogsmeade, etc..... I would love to hear more about the muggle born witches and wizards on the run. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping to touch on them in the next chapter actually! It's just tricky when it's all from Ginny's point of view!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 10:35AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them

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Ooh, I wonder what Snape's banning her for?
I loved the inclusion of Fred, George, and Bill
keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)




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