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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.11.11 - 07:32AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them Your version of the Forbidden Forest detention seems to me to be one of the middle-ground versions of the punishment. On the one hand are those writers who make the trip into the forest completely terrifying, while on the other extreme, it's just a nature walk led by Hagrid. You've given us the friendly in Hagrid, but also lent a bit of fear with the confrontation with the Centaurs. Nicely done. Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2015.10.26 - 07:22AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them Sorry I am late with the review, I was busy :) Reviewer: hijadejewell Signed Date: 2015.10.24 - 05:22AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them No Review Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 06:33PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them Great chapter. Loved the scene with Ginny and her brothers at the pub in Hogsmead. I can easily imagine her parents wanting to check in on her in some way. The part with Hagrid was well written, and clearly showed his frustration with the Centaurs. Looking forward to reading your next chapter. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 04:16PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them Really enjoyed this one! Bugbears may stink but the Carrows probably smell worse! All of Hogwarts is dark now not just the forest! Can't wait to see what Snape wants! Can't wait for the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 03:58PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them Love reading it from Ginny's point of view. Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 03:57PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them Love reading it from Ginny's point of view. Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 02:15PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them An excellent chapter. You are covering all the aspects of the war.... Hogwarts, Grimmauld Place, The Forbidden Forest, Hogsmeade, etc..... I would love to hear more about the muggle born witches and wizards on the run. Good job. Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.10.23 - 10:35AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fantastic Creatures and Where to Find Them Ooh, I wonder what Snape's banning her for? | |||||||
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