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Reviewer: melindaleo Signed
Date: 2015.12.09 - 03:45PM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
Yikes! That was a scary ending. I think it was actually over Easter when they took Luna, but no matter either way. My favorite in this chapter was McGonagall. I've always loved McGonagall, and its nice to see her doing her part to undermine Snape and the Carrows. It's exactly what I expected of her. This story is so engrossing. I haven't done anything I'm supposed to do today!
Author's Response: Sadly it was definitely Christmas - Luna was rescued during the Easter holidays. DH is a messy timeline to sort out though!
So glad you like McGonagall! I can't resist writing her in little heart-to-hearts!
Reviewer: Kanour Signed
Date: 2015.11.19 - 05:19PM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
Yeah, I understand, no hurry, your family okay?
Author's Response: Yes, thankfully, but a very lucky escape.
Reviewer: Kanour Signed
Date: 2015.11.19 - 04:56AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
When can we expect new chapter, please? :)
Author's Response: Hi, sorry, soon. I have a family member in Paris and, well real life has just ended up putting a brief halt on my writing. I'd nearly finished the chapter on Friday before I heard, so when I'm feeling a bit better I'll complete it and submit.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2015.11.12 - 12:39AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
Luna's abduction was just as creepy and cruel as I ever imagined. Again, you know your characters and their mannerisms well since Luna went quietly while the others needed to be restrained. I have to admire Ginny for trying to Stun Rabastan. I'm just glad the other two intruders didn't rough Ginny up because she tried to rescue her friend.
Potterwatch seems to have taken the castle by storm, especially the DA. There's nothing worse than not knowing what's going on in the world and while the news is solemn, it's quite clear that between the broadcast and Luna's hidden Quibblers, there is hope seeping into the castle through ingeniously fashioned means.
I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having trouble with the next chapter but hopefully it will be up soon! :)
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed
Date: 2015.11.08 - 10:05PM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
This was another stellar chapter! I think you do a great job of hitting on everyone's feeling during the progression of this Hogwarts nightmare - especially Ginny's! Hated to see Luna get taken even if it was inevitable but I think you did it well - very realistic! Can't wait for the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2015.11.08 - 10:22AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
Well written chapter. I know that things are going to continue to go downhill as the year progresses. Glad that Minerva and most of the other professors are able to help.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2015.11.08 - 09:05AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
Superb chapter, I really liked McGonagall telling Ginny about Ron
Can't believe it's xmas already and Luna's kidnapping
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2015.11.08 - 01:37AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
oh no.... i am bawling my eyes out. Where are those tissues and buckets when you need them? an emotionally wrecked chapter. brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a lot of trouble with this chapter, so I'm so happy you liked it.
Reviewer: Kanour Signed
Date: 2015.11.07 - 09:26PM
Title: Chapter Sixteen: Rumours Abound
Wow, Christmas already?
I couldn't find out who was that unknown close source. After long time I realized that must be Ron, right?
I had always loved McGonagall. I am certain she had to be very supportive for Ginny and the rest of the opposition at Hogwarts in this school year. So you did good job with her character in this chapter.
But with Lovegood I am not so sure. Do you think he would be so foolish or daring?
Maxipads... hilarious :D
I am looking forward to Christmas. I think it will be interesting. Thank you :)
Author's Response: Yep, Christmas, although timeline wise I am one chapter ahead of DH!
Yes, it's Ron - he's arrived at Shell Cottage now. I had actually written the entire chapter with McGonagall telling Ginny Ron was there, before I realised in canon he said that the rest of the family didn't know, so I had to rewrite the whole thing.
I'm so glad you liked McGonagall. In terms of Xeno Lovegood, I knew he'd been openly supporting them for some time, but I thought he must have really done something to cross the line for Luna to get kidnapped.
Thanks for your review! :)
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