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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.01.19 - 04:47PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Ollivander's baiting of Muriel with the suspense story of his capture and confinement is wonderfully done. He had that old gossip perched on the edge of her seat and nearly breathing down his neck with his long, dramatic pauses and adept descriptions. He's as good a storyteller as he is a wand maker in this story and I love how you've captured his character.

Thank goodness for Andromeda's Patronus message. It seems to have saved both Molly and Ginny from going crazy due to Auntie Muriel's constant criticism. Baby Teddy sounds precious and the way he's doted on by both grandmother and parents shows just how special a miracle he really is.

All in all, nice chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I find Ollivander really hard to write, so your kind words really mean a lot to me :)



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 05:36PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Oh, I truly loved reading this chapter. Hearing about Remus and Tonks and how happy they were about the birth of their son and Remus asking Harry to be godfather. It was brilliant. I am eager to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is taking longer than usual, but I promise it will be worth it!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.01.12 - 08:01PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Lovely chapter.
I can just see Fred and George driving Muriel even battier than what she was. They must be feeling similar to Ginny...all couped up in that big house.
Lovely introduction of Teddy. I feel for Ginny. She is missing Harry a lot. To know he is just a floo trip away and she can't go and see him.
Looking forward to reading the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.01.11 - 09:07AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Wonderful chapter! Loved the bit with the Lupins but very sad knowing what's coming! You have a marvelous way of bringing to life the events not really well known from the books or movies! Keep it up! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 02:53PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Muriel is hilarious. So sad to think that Remus and Tonks got so little time with Teddy, when you show them as such a happy little family.

Author's Response: She's a lot of fun to write. Very tempted to write a cheesy little one-shot with her.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 02:23PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Thank you so much for the update. What a treat. Please update very soon.... now it will be all bout the dragon! I wonder whether there will be a chaper on Charlie when you will bring out the great escape from Gringotts......

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Next chapter hopefully within the next week :)



Reviewer: lindsaycarpenter Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 11:40AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 10:10AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Nicely done! Poor Ginny, hearing those tantalizing tidbits about Harry must be excruciating. Poor thing. I know her waiting is almost over, but she doesn't. I can sympathize because patience has never been my strong suit, either. Ollivander was full of information, but my favorite part was Fred and George driving Aunt Muriel even more batty. Loved the scene where Arthur tried to hide with Ginny.

I really hope you'll give us some of the reunion JKR skipped. I'm not sure I'll ever forgive her for that!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely words! Next chapter will be along soon :)



Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 08:34AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

Just wonderful, especially the end. Remus was great. Poor Ginny, luckily her suffering is going to end soon.
I wanted to kill Muriel few times again :D Which is good, that´s Muriel from the canon.
Ollivander was very open. I expected he would be more distant and not so revealing. But who knows...
I know Harry and Ginny couldn´t and can´t meet each other yet but it´s such a shame. Ginny could leave the house to meet Teddy but can´t g to the Shell cottage? Terrible.
Can´t wait for the next chapters.



Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 08:34AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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Just wonderful, especially the end. Remus was great. Poor Ginny, luckily her suffering is going to end soon.
I wanted to kill Muriel few times again :D Which is good, that´s Muriel from the canon.
Ollivander was very open. I expected he would be more distant and not so revealing. But who knows...
I know Harry and Ginny couldn´t and can´t meet each other yet but it´s such a shame. Ginny could leave the house to meet Teddy but can´t g to the Shell cottage? Terrible.
Can´t wait for the next chapters.

Author's Response: Yeah, this was the chapter I found the hardest because I find Ollivander just impossible to write - I just don't get his character at all. Hopefully I'll never have to write him again! I would have loved to have written a little Ginny-Harry reunion, but not long to go now anyway!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 07:54AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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I might be old but I like babies.

Author's Response: Same!



Reviewer: hijadejewell Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 12:49AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin

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