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Reviewer: Thor-Ablestar Signed Date: 2016.03.01 - 02:58PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Good thing Ginny is on the potion. Any kids produce by those two would probably be weapons of mass destruction as soon as they learned to crawl. You have to feel bad for them though that their first time got to be so clinically analyzed. As always, this story continues to impress.

Author's Response: Still, not many people can say their first time was that memorable, eh?



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.12.25 - 06:00AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Wow, that was a really impressive first time. However, I sincerely hope that the two of them haven't stained the cloak. It would be a pity if they are discovered because of such spots sometime later, lol. Or are such spots also invisible? Hmm, hard question.
Florean is addressed as "my dear friend". Seems we can definitely exclude a Death Eater companionship.
Dumbledore proves that he can be very astute when he clears the cause of the storm. If only he could always be so sharp-witted.
Oh, what a Cliffie. I enjoy the grace of the late reader and simply read on...

Author's Response: Florean's friend is about as far from being a Death Eater as it's possible to get. Fortunately, Invisibility Cloaks are machine washable, so Harry shouldn't have too many problems.



Reviewer: Paternas Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 02:45PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Nice work again. Alas poor Harry just can not have a normal life apparently. When he is not fleeing dragons (I wonder what Ginny has to say about that), he can not enjoy his private time with his girlfriend without causing magical storms. And he is questioned by his octogenarian headmaster about it afterwards...

Author's Response: Harry should just be glad Dumbledore didn't want him to go into more detail.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2015.12.14 - 06:17PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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The trip into the bowels of Gringotts was quite unexpected. Your flair for the action scenes is still top notch. Nice touch having Dumb* use an archaic broom, it is the little details that you include that stick with me over time.

I wouldn't have thought Wonka unless you brought it up. Now if you would have had a chocolate river, with house elves doing a singing and dancing number about morals then I might have spoken up.

Author's Response: Great, now I have the image of little orange house elves singing and dancing about stuck in my head...



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.12.13 - 11:10AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Great chapter! Harry and Ginny are wonderful together - the image of them huddling under the Invisibilty Cloak to avoid her parents is great. I'm sure James Potter would have approved of Harry using his cloak like that. Poor Harry can't even have sex for the first time without causing everyone to run around like the sky is falling. I really liked the scene in the Room of Requirement - it was very sweet. Dumbledore and Harry breaking into Gringotts - great idea. Who knew goblins employed guard griffins? Can't wait to see how they get out of this one.


Author's Response: I'm sure Harry was thinking 'why me? after starting that storm. Come to think of it, he was probably thinking that as he hurtled towards certain death after being thrown of that cliff by a dragon, too. '



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 07:09PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Another great chapter. You really are a brilliant author, and Harry and Dumbledore breaking into Gringotts is extraordinary. My only suggestion for this chapter involves the very intimate scene between Harry and Ginny. As a woman, who has had many honest conversations with other women about the first time, I must tell you that the first time is always painful. Even if the young woman is ready and prepared, some pain, a wince or gasp, really is to be expected. Other than that, I loved this chapter. Looking forward to reading what will happen next.

Author's Response: I do see your point, I really do. But on the other hand, not many woman's first times set of magical storms either, do they? This is pure fantasy.



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 03:48PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

Is the true enemy Voldemort or someone worse???? Great chapter.

Author's Response: Ah, the sticky 'submit' button strikes again!



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 03:48PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Is the true enemy Voldemort or someone worse???? Great chapter.

Author's Response: You don't really expect me to tell you, do you? Let's just say that the last third of this story ventures off into infrequently explored territory and leave if like that for now.



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 02:43PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Another great chapter filled with all kinds of excitement :-) Your stories just keep getting better. Now I wonder if Ginny will be mad at Harry for messing with griffins and dragons without her. You know, just for the sake of him having to ask forgiveness nicely :P

Author's Response: You're assuming Harry survives to beg forgiveness from Ginny. I suppose the fact that there are 16 chapters still to come sort of gives that away, doesn't it?



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 01:59PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Well I couldn't be more tickled if I was being attacked by an enchanted quill feather! The Pablo Picasso of practical yet powerfully pugnacious platitudes has presented us with more literary brilliance! (OK, I tried jelly and ice cream, using my sister-in-law's homemade apple butter jelly and WOW! New Fav New Fav!) There, there don't cry soldier! You Brits are also known for having a stiff upper lips! ;) Naughtiness? Bloody hell, mate! A hickey on the neck where anyone can see it is naughty! The scene with Harry and Ginny in the orchard was down-right X-rating worthy! (Mrs. Auror and I have never set off a storm but we've been close a time or two - wink wink)! Why do I get a sudden feeling that Florean's friend could be Merlin? I have to admit Dumbledore has his moments! Harry and Ginny are a power couple with a capital P! Quite an adventure in the bank cavern and what a dastardly cliffhanger at the end! BTW, are those Griffins that crashed into each other the first on the body count list? (Not that I'd want to be the one to check their pulses)! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: You're not fooling me - I know that every American Harry Potter fan knows that British jelly is your jello. You're just hurting yourself by not trying it, you know. I would have let Harry take out those Griffins, but the RSPB (that's, the Royal Society for the Protection of Beasts) threatened to kick my head in if I did. They're a protected species now, apparently.



Reviewer: Inquisitor Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 11:35AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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It seems Voldermort will not be the end boss, but merely a push over.

I'm not sure breaking into Gringotts was the wisest solution, using Tonks to impersonate Bellatrix might have worked better. They are even related.

Author's Response: You could say that about canon though, couldn't you? Harry and his friends doing recklessly stupid things is how we get all the best scenes.



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 10:22AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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Great pacing in this chapter! Very few authours have the patience to spin out action sequences into gripping narratives that burn their way into one's imagination and memory, but the outer cavern is definitely stamped in my head now!

Author's Response: I have to say, I'm really chuffed how the Gringotts part came out. Good excuse to do some broom research, too!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 09:05AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death

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oh wow!
ha ha that he had to tell Dumbledore what they'd been doing.
Interesting direction that the story is going in - keep it up! :)

Author's Response: This story actually takes a lot of twists and turns before the end. It will start turning a lot darker soon, and then goes off in a completely different direction again. Never let it be said that I'm predictable.




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