Reviews For Abraxas
Reviewer: Thor-Ablestar Signed Date: 2016.03.01 - 02:58PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Good thing Ginny is on the potion. Any kids produce by those two would probably be weapons of mass destruction as soon as they learned to crawl. You have to feel bad for them though that their first time got to be so clinically analyzed. As always, this story continues to impress. Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.12.25 - 06:00AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Wow, that was a really impressive first time. However, I sincerely hope that the two of them haven't stained the cloak. It would be a pity if they are discovered because of such spots sometime later, lol. Or are such spots also invisible? Hmm, hard question. Reviewer: Paternas Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 02:45PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Nice work again. Alas poor Harry just can not have a normal life apparently. When he is not fleeing dragons (I wonder what Ginny has to say about that), he can not enjoy his private time with his girlfriend without causing magical storms. And he is questioned by his octogenarian headmaster about it afterwards... Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2015.12.14 - 06:17PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death The trip into the bowels of Gringotts was quite unexpected. Your flair for the action scenes is still top notch. Nice touch having Dumb* use an archaic broom, it is the little details that you include that stick with me over time. Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.12.13 - 11:10AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Great chapter! Harry and Ginny are wonderful together - the image of them huddling under the Invisibilty Cloak to avoid her parents is great. I'm sure James Potter would have approved of Harry using his cloak like that. Poor Harry can't even have sex for the first time without causing everyone to run around like the sky is falling. I really liked the scene in the Room of Requirement - it was very sweet. Dumbledore and Harry breaking into Gringotts - great idea. Who knew goblins employed guard griffins? Can't wait to see how they get out of this one. Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 07:09PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Another great chapter. You really are a brilliant author, and Harry and Dumbledore breaking into Gringotts is extraordinary. My only suggestion for this chapter involves the very intimate scene between Harry and Ginny. As a woman, who has had many honest conversations with other women about the first time, I must tell you that the first time is always painful. Even if the young woman is ready and prepared, some pain, a wince or gasp, really is to be expected. Other than that, I loved this chapter. Looking forward to reading what will happen next. Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 03:48PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Is the true enemy Voldemort or someone worse???? Great chapter. Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 03:48PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Is the true enemy Voldemort or someone worse???? Great chapter. Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 02:43PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Another great chapter filled with all kinds of excitement :-) Your stories just keep getting better. Now I wonder if Ginny will be mad at Harry for messing with griffins and dragons without her. You know, just for the sake of him having to ask forgiveness nicely :P Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 01:59PM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Well I couldn't be more tickled if I was being attacked by an enchanted quill feather! The Pablo Picasso of practical yet powerfully pugnacious platitudes has presented us with more literary brilliance! (OK, I tried jelly and ice cream, using my sister-in-law's homemade apple butter jelly and WOW! New Fav New Fav!) There, there don't cry soldier! You Brits are also known for having a stiff upper lips! ;) Naughtiness? Bloody hell, mate! A hickey on the neck where anyone can see it is naughty! The scene with Harry and Ginny in the orchard was down-right X-rating worthy! (Mrs. Auror and I have never set off a storm but we've been close a time or two - wink wink)! Why do I get a sudden feeling that Florean's friend could be Merlin? I have to admit Dumbledore has his moments! Harry and Ginny are a power couple with a capital P! Quite an adventure in the bank cavern and what a dastardly cliffhanger at the end! BTW, are those Griffins that crashed into each other the first on the body count list? (Not that I'd want to be the one to check their pulses)! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: Inquisitor Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 11:35AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death It seems Voldermort will not be the end boss, but merely a push over. Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 10:22AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death Great pacing in this chapter! Very few authours have the patience to spin out action sequences into gripping narratives that burn their way into one's imagination and memory, but the outer cavern is definitely stamped in my head now! Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 09:05AM Title: Chapter 9 - Of Love and Death oh wow! | |||||||
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