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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.12.25 - 06:11AM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

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Harry's appearance at the Slug Club was truly phenomenal and refreshingly un-canon-like.
Thanks for another phenomenal instalment.

Author's Response: If you think the story is un-canon-like at this point, just wait until later! I'll definitely be mixing things up a bit, especially in the last third of the story.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.12.23 - 08:07AM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

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Great chapter.

I am glad Harry found a way to save himself. Voldie didn't just fly during the rescue of the 7 Potters, but also during part 2 of DH. During the final fight with Harry, Voldie flies with Harry around Hogwarts trying to get rid of him, before they landed in the courtyard; and the final confrontation.

Ginny is a force to be reckoned with. I think Dean got off easy with only the Bat Bogey hex. It could have been worse.

Awaiting the next instalment of this story.

Merry Christmas to you and yours. May you have a healthy, happy and safe New Year. 🎄🎉🎅

Au thor's Response: Of course, the flying around the courtyard bit was only in the movie, not the book. As I recently splashed out on buying the complete set on Blu-ray on Black Friday, I guess I'll get to relive those scenes again soon! Merry Christmas to you, too, CJ, and have a great New Year.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.12.22 - 10:12AM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

Hey Mate! Just in case you don't release a new chapter before, I wish you and yours a Happy Christmas! :D

Author's Response: I hope you and yours have a great time, too. Thanks for all the wonderful reviews throughout the year. They never fail to bring a smile to my face.



Reviewer: Paternas Signed Date: 2015.12.20 - 01:16PM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

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Good chapter. It's nice to see Slughorn being taken down a notch. It seems Dean has to learn how to handle rejection...

Author's Response: I'm sure Dean's got the message by this point. :-)



Reviewer: Inquisitor Signed Date: 2015.12.19 - 01:51PM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

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Dumbledore was a master safecracker! No wonder they decided to just sneak in and avoid all the impersonation shenanigans.

We haven't seen anything from Voldermort's side so far, and so I assume he'd been doing the same as in the canon?

Author's Response: Voldemort's sneaking around, keeping a low profile. That will change in a few chapters time. Prepare to see the body count start to rocket.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.12.18 - 10:08AM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

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Another great chapter! You really surprised me with Harry's last minute save. I had completely forgotten old Voldemort knew how to fly without a broom. The scenes with Dean were fun too. Its probably unfair to the character but but as a Harry/Ginny fan, I tend to enjoy seeing him get slapped around. Looking forward to the next chapter of your latest opus!

Author's Response: Someone called the flying thing on FF.Net, but I'm surprised no one else remembered. In fact, it's a talent that's not featured in many stories, at all. Don't worry too much about Dean, I'm sure he'll find a girl more his speed in due course.



Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2015.12.18 - 12:01AM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

Good chapter

Author's Response: Thank you



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.12.17 - 09:54PM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

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Well Zippity Doo Dah! The Charles Dickens of dastardly daring drama has delivered more literary delights! Okay, I admit I like cherry or lime jello(jelly)on chocolate chip ice cream - Mrs Auror was born in Scotland(we met while I was serving in the US military in the UK) so I didn't have much choice! Gringotts sure turned out to be a pain-in-the-ass for everyone but the dragon! ;) Somehow I never pictured Dumbledore as a safe cracker! Ginny + red-headed temper = bad news for Dean! Nice to see Harry put Slughorn, Zabini and Dean in their places! BTW, don't worry! If you fail to show up for the next chapter, I'll send out a rescue party - wouldn't want you to end up on your own body count list! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Ah ha! I knew it. All you Yanks claiming you don't like jelly and ice cream - it was all a ploy, wasn't it! As you see, I survived late night shopping surprisingly intact. Shame I have to do my main food shop tomorrow. Hell, thy name is Waitrose...



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.12.17 - 08:20PM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

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Great chapter. I love seeing a strong Neville in stories. It will be interesting to see how the interactions between Harry and the Slytherins change throughout this story. I am also curious to see how the professors handle Harry and his friends. The restraint Harry showed in waiting while Ginny tried to talk things out with Dean was impressive. It is a shame that he apparently did not listen to her.

Author's Response: Having a bit of Tom Riddle in his head has apparently granted Harry some common sense. Letting Ginny deal (initially) with Dean was totally the right thing to do. Just as well, as some of the normally more sensible characters in the HP world will go a bit loopy later on.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2015.12.17 - 07:57PM Title: Chapter 10 - Progressions of Power

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Awww poor Dean always falls short of the Mark :)

So you formed the premise that a rush of adrenaline coupled with impending demise allowed for the raw magic tendrils to allow Harry to fly? I always wondered how Voldemort was able to fly, such as he did in the 7 Harry chase in D.H. In the context you have described things it may have been a similar type of deal. Then again in the movie Tom had a bit of a wraith quality while he flew so perhaps not.

Is Slughorn still to play a role or have you made the old Walrus shit himself in fear? He seems too arrogant and politically ambitious to be taken out of the story loop thus far.

A good Brennus gore fest upon Blaise would be appreciated. Perhaps conjure some orange faced house elves with green hair and overalls and ARM them with knives? I know you already wrote the story, but one can always hope for some serious bloodshed that is funny.

Also I do hope you allow our young lovers some "alone" time to conjure another magik storm.

Cheers, you crazy bastard....and Merry Spankmas to your X wife or whatever.

Author's Response: Merry Spankmas? It would be more than my life was worth...




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