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Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2015.12.24 - 06:16PM Title: Heartbroken
I thought this would be that reason they are so open. So their letters are more diaries than letters, aren´t they?
I hoped there would be some H/G reunion after the battle at the end. I am looking forward to it very much.
I am glad my review helped. I know how the reviews are important for the writing.
Author's Response: Diaries certainly describe the letters.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.12.21 - 06:24AM Title: Heartbroken
A good start. However, I hope there will be some action and not just the letters. Without action, the story is going to be dreadfully dull.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I appreciate all reviews, including those with constructive criticism. However, I feel I am going to disappoint you with the story that I have planned. As I already said in my author notes, this is a letter/diary format story. I am aiming to explore their thoughts, feelings and emotions of the events throughout the year and for each other. I will not be ignoring any action as each chapter has been planned around specific points of the story. In a way, you could say that they are confessing to each other their plans and actions they have taken, while dealing with their own fears and worries. Anyway, I do hope you stick with the story and are able to see what I am trying to accomplish. Thank you again for the review.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.12.21 - 05:56AM Title: Heartbroken
Yea harry screwed up big time but for the right reason. And lucky for him ginny understood that reason and went with it....thought she should have gone with the trio and been a little safer but not by much....kutgw
Author's Response: I absolutely agree! I love those two together. They completely understand each other, so I am hoping that shows throughout the chapters.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2015.12.20 - 08:25PM Title: Heartbroken
I loved it all but especially those words " you have possession of my heart and I need you to keep it safe" ❤️
Author's Response: Awww, thank you. I have to admit I am big soppy romantic at heart, so expect a lot more of that in the chapters to come!
