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Reviewer: Kanour Signed
Date: 2016.02.11 - 03:02AM
Title: A Lonely Christmas
There is not many to write I am afraid.
You combine the canon events with some your own very well.
I think Harry might be angry at Xenophilius for a while but he definitely understood him.
So the end is coming. I am looking forward to it :)
Author's Response: Two more chapters, decided to combine two of the three I had planned as it worked better. Thank you very much for the comments. Writing alongside the canon is not an easy thing to do as I want to do it justice while writing my interpretation of additional events and of their feelings. Next chapter is nearly ready, I suspect it will be up within the next week!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2016.02.07 - 07:28PM
Title: A Lonely Christmas
They both are describing their situations well. KUTGW.
Author's Response: Thank you. Not an easy thing to do without falling into the trap of rehashing the book, which I obviously don't want to do, but yet I cannot ignore certain parts.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2016.02.01 - 09:26AM
Title: A Lonely Christmas
I also felt sorry for luna when she was taken......but like harry i didnt feel bad for luna's dad because he was stuck and needed a way out....kutgw
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I cannot see why Harry would get mad at her dad for doing what he did. He was a desperate man doing what he thought was the only thing to get his daughter back. As a mum, I complete sympathize with him.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2016.02.01 - 09:26AM
Title: A Lonely Christmas
I also felt sorry for luna when she was taken......but like harry i didnt feel bad for luna's dad because he was stuck and needed a way out....kutgw
Author's Response: Any parent would do the same. I know I would.
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