Reviews For Without a Trace
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2017.05.29 - 02:32AM Title: Chapter 1 The Ball
I honestly don't know if this is my fourth of fifth time to read this story. I've re-read a lot of your work recently. In real life I've been feeling a bit low and there is something ab out your writing that cheers me up dramatically. So, first, let me say, "Thank you!" I love your take on this story. I think you have Ron spot-on canonically. As for Hermione, I think she varies from canon, but once you establish that she never forgave Ginny for loosing the Basilisk and getting Hermione petrified, then it all comes perfectly well together. Percy is a prick, so that's about as canonical as it can get! So, I love your premise. Harry's reaction is also spot-on, and Ginny would be furious ... and rightly so. In canon, Ron is lacking in self confidence and remarkably jealous, all the while neglecting to see how he has everything Harry wants! In all honesty, I dislike Ron in the books fairly strongly, so your approach fits perfectly with my view of the Potterverse! All in all, this is great stuff. Very satisfying! I won't pretend that I don't know where it is headed, but it is worth another quick ride!!!
Reviewer: smokeylovegood Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 01:29PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
I quite enjoyed this story.
Reviewer: BigFatMaybe Signed Date: 2016.01.20 - 08:13PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Nice little story. I like the build-up of it, the gradual discovery of what happened. It really reminds me of another story on fanfiction.net, The Unbreakable Vow. The premise there too is that Harry and Ginny ran away, and it has the same buildup as you used. It certainly has a lot of potential!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.19 - 06:16PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Nice ending to this story.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.19 - 05:37PM Title: Chapter 4 Discovery
They are all handling the reunion remarkably well so far. No yelling and no tears yet. I am curious to see if that continues. Hermione and Ron also clearly owe Harry and Ginny an apology for starters.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.19 - 06:52AM Title: Chapter 3 Lavenham
Percy is so easy to dislike, and Ron and Hermione are certainly disappointing characters in this story to say the least. I love the house that Harry and Ginny have restored and made into a comfortable home. Molly and Arthur are sure to be thrilled that they are married. I am concerned that they almost certainly do not want to be found. Looking forward to reading about Kingsley correcting his employees.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.18 - 08:26PM Title: Chapter 2
Really disappointing Ron in this story. I am glad that Arthur is trying to find Ginny and Harry. Looking forward to reading the next chapter and finding out where you intend to take this story.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.18 - 07:24PM Title: Chapter 1 The Ball
Interesting beginning. I see that we are not fond of Hermione and Ron in this story. I am curious to see where you are planning to take this plot line and whether or not we will get answers about Harry and Ginny.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.01.18 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Smahing end to a marvelous story! I have to admit I actually cheated and read this chapter on the other site under your other penname! Didn't realized that was you as well! Have loved your stuff for years! Thanks for yet another ride on your pen!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2016.01.18 - 04:26PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Satisfying ending to a very nice story. Good that Ron and Hermione were not entirely forgiven, and I always like to see the Potters with lots of children.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.01.18 - 01:50PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Another one on the way??? Three grand children wear me out.
Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2016.01.18 - 11:34AM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Nice AU story. Never really got into Harry as an Auror. I like to stories where he teaches at Hogwarts.
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2016.01.18 - 10:23AM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Reviewer: hubris Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 11:54PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Really glad that there wasn't an immediate reconciliation with Ron and Hermione. Hope to see a dose of reality from Harry if he is prevailed upon to speak. Really an enjoyable tale.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 07:43PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
I'm glad Hermione wasn't let off lightly.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 07:11PM Title: Chapter 4 Discovery
Harry has such a big kind heart that I can see him forgiving Hermione, but she doesn't deserve it in my opinion. I don't see Ginny being so forgiving...
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 07:10PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Ah nice to see that something will change but not all things and im glad to see they are giving hermione and ron a feee pass and they shouldn't get it....as for harry and ginny moving forward they look happy and healthy and with one on the way in for more fun....kutgw
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 07:03PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
Well done! A nice read.
Reviewer: Kukia Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 05:57PM Title: Chapter 5 The Victory Ball
wonderful story. Loved the ending.
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2016.01.14 - 02:25PM Title: Chapter 4 Discovery
Nice work Kingsley, in getting rid of those three. It's amazing what you can find if you really want to look. A few home truths for Hermione. Not sure that she will ever really admit to being so wrong, but who knows. Its certainly good to read a story where she's not at the forefront of finding Harry. Initial reunions seem to have gone ok; here's hoping the Potters can keep their good life and just let in who they choose.