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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.03.15 - 08:21PM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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Harry is certainly getting into the midst of Ginny's family.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.11 - 06:48PM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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Teddy and Tori are really something. Harry and Sirius have their hands full with Teddy. It looks like Bill and Fluer will have an interesting time with Tori as well. I am glad to see more of the Weasley family and eager to see what will happen next.

Author's Response: Would be nice to know at 6 youve met your soul mate, wouldnt it. Posting next chapter soon xx



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.02.11 - 09:37AM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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I think Auror of the Light has a crush on you. Your stories ARE rather seductive, so I can't blame him for the adoration he rains upon you.;) It seems the younger Teddy could teach Harry a thing or two about keeping his woman pleased, at least a few general pointers could be given if not taught by behavioral example. I think Harry's observing of the way Teddy is with Tori could go a long way. I would bet Teddy would blow off the advances of any other girl at school who may find Teddy interesting, even if to the utter bewilderment of one of his playmates, lol . Teaching about love though? I don't know, some things can only be experienced no matter how much studying is done in preparation for the thing beforehand. Yes, it is one of those reviews. Can't leave you out of the fun Mum :). Loving the story.

Author's Response: Haha, I hope so, Valentine's Day is just around the corner you know, hint hint AotL! I loved all your comments, I actually added the bit with Teddy asking if Harry's tummy goes squirmy when he sees Ginny. My thoughts are that Teddy would be the most open to love out of the three of them. He's been brought up in a loving house and been told his parents loved him. Tori also has been brought up in a big family full of love and instantly gravitated to Teddy and she is the first female he's really taken to. Harry desperately wants love and a family, hence all the horrible dates, and as so often happens, when you are not looking for something, thats when you find it. He's been attracted to Ginny since she started in his class, although he looks on it as 'she bothers him'. He doesnt really know what to make of her, she's strong, fun, lots of friends, in his eyes, everything he's not. Yet he too gravitates to her, by calling on her in class etc. Sirius is the one who needs love the most. He lost his best friends twice, (inc Remus and Tonks there) and made both Harry and later Teddy his priority. Glad youre loving it, it was great fun to write xx



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.02.11 - 07:46AM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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So the plot thickens... with a bit of childhood romance thrown in for good measure. I think Harry and Sirius were railroaded by the school personnel into keeping Teddy's abilities secret, which has now led to this incident. Ginny was right that that is the way prejudice spreads. If Teddy's classmates had been aware of his abilities, I don't think this bullying would have happened. I salute Victoire for defending her friend.

Author's Response: Yes, at this stage Tori is the dominant one in the relationship, but as we saw with Ron, Teddy will stand up for Tori no matter what. (Sigh) Unconditional love, dont you love it! xx



Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2016.02.11 - 12:56AM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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When I saw there would be some fluff, I hoped it finally would be the breakdown in H/G relationship. But it was Teddy/Tori fluff :D And it was great.
Anyway now we can be certain Harry and Ginny will be meeting each other very often (because of the children).

Ginevra? :D

Author's Response: Ha ha, theres lots more Tori/Teddy fluff to come, and lots more Harry/Ginny love. Watch this spot xx



Reviewer: decdraft Signed Date: 2016.02.10 - 08:45PM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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Very sweet :). Loved Tori and Teddy. Really enjoying this story . Interested to see how Ginny's last in Harry's class is

Author's Response: I loved writing Tori and Teddy in this one, they are so cute together. More fluff in the next one too xx



Reviewer: JellyBeanZ Signed Date: 2016.02.10 - 07:22PM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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worth the wait :P


Author's Response: Whew! Lots more fun stuff to come xx



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.02.10 - 04:34PM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

Ah harry and teddy are in good hands now...ginny may need to kill harry if he uses her full name....kutgw

Author's Response: I think shed like it if he said in a sexy way!! Dont you?! :0



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2016.02.10 - 02:27PM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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Great by-play. I enjoyed how Tori and Teddy intereact--and how the mention of Remus and Tonks resonates wtih everyone. Thanks.

Author's Response: Lots more fun Teddy/Tori stuff to come, and another mention of Remus in the next chapter xx



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2016.02.10 - 02:14PM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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That was precious! And funny!
My favorite line: "...you are way ahead of me, kid". Just cute!!! Wonder if Ginny would have heard him ;)
Have I told you yet that I really, REALLY like this story???
KUTGW and fast updates :D

Author's Response: Mmm, yes i think that you mentioned it, but i LOVE hearing it. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment, and as always, thanks to the vailidators for the fast updates, they're the champs for that! xx



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.02.10 - 12:53PM Title: Chapter 5 Thursday

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The fluff meter was definitely off the chart for this little gem! The bits with Teddy and Tori put me on the floor rolling with laughter! Teddy is certainly seems quicker on the trigger than Harry when it comes to women! And Harry meets his future in-laws to boot! Marvelous chapter!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Next chapter sees Teddy giving Harry advice on love abd women. But ssshhh dont tell anyone, its a sneak preview just for you! xx




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