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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 09:33PM Title: Prequel

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Interesting chapter.



Reviewer: PsychoGeek Signed Date: 2016.02.18 - 04:03PM Title: Prequel

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That was the best start to a story I've read in a long time. Really, really dark (you should change it to an R rating) but Ginny's snarkiness give the story fun and hope within the darkness. There were some really good moments in there as well. I especially liked that brief flashback to Sirius.

I'm not sure as to where the story goes now, but I certainly look forward to it. While Ginny's healing is sure to be a major part of it, I hope there is more plot than that. I also hope this isn't the last time we've seen Amycus and Alecto. Given all that happened in this chapter, I feel they deserve some sort of personal comeuppance from Ginny.

The only complaint I had with this chapter was the PoV shift in the final scene with Ginny and Arthur. The scene starts from Ginny's PoV, but moves on to Arthur a few sentences prefer. I don't like PoV shifts without scene breaks.

Overall, Great work! Please update as soon as you can.



Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2016.02.17 - 10:46PM Title: Prequel

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This is definitely not a G rating but other than that I'm hooked. I hope she does tell someone what's going on. No-one can suffer all that alone.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.17 - 06:18PM Title: Prequel

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I'm thinking you should probably change the rating of this story. R is definitely justified here. This story is quite frightening already. Curious to see where you will go with this.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.02.17 - 03:44PM Title: Prequel

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I actually feel I want to shout at Ginny. What purpose is served by not asking for help? Next chapter.




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