Reviews For For the Sins Against My Father
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.12.23 - 10:56AM Title: Chapter 1 I could really feel James' anguish, and at his age it's difficult to control your emotions and know the best way to deal with them. Poor Harry must have been beside himself with worry. Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.12.22 - 09:03PM Title: Chapter 1 I could really feel James' anguish, and at his age it's difficult to control your emotions and know the best way to deal with them. Poor Harry must have been beside himself with worry. Reviewer: hills Signed Date: 2016.05.17 - 11:24AM Title: Chapter 1 Oh my heart! This is so sweet. James Sirius Potter you absolute angel you! Reviewer: pickledtoad Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 10:31PM Title: Chapter 1 Well done - very believable teenage angst Reviewer: scuba Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 04:43PM Title: Chapter 1 This story just pulls your emotions from you. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.02.19 - 06:45PM Title: Chapter 1 This had some very intense moments but some very heart-warming ones too! Brilliance abounds from thy mighty quill, O Queen! Thou art definitely on a roll! Thanks for another masterpiece! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D: Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.02.19 - 08:43AM Title: Chapter 1 The finished story is even better than the first draft you sent me. You've given James an voice of his own, one that's deeply indignant about the injustices Harry suffered as a child, and one that will probably carry James' sense of fairness into adulthood. I smiled when he asked his family to start calling him by the more formal version of his name because his decision to be known more formally signifies a change in the way he thinks of himself and shows he's growing up. Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.02.19 - 08:32AM Title: Chapter 1 Awwwwww...... tears? Laughter? What can I say? Good job. Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2016.02.19 - 08:19AM Title: Chapter 1 I liked this - a lot! Too often James is portrayed as the joker in the pack, and not much else, so it was really nice to see a different side to him. He's right too- Harry needs to take Petunia to Godric's Hollow; he'd regret it if he didn't since he's obviously forgiven the past to a certain extent. This was a lovely family group you created here - I just wish the story had been longer so we'd been able to see more of them. | |||||||
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