Reviews For The Aurors
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.04.12 - 08:29PM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
What a mess! A dead death eaters wife, a room with potions, and a rookie who does not know how to handle a dead body. Harry certainly has his work cut out with this case. Glad to see that Ginny is handling it all so well.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 10:33PM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
Ah the kid is starting to get to harry but in a good way...maybe she needs to see harry is e family life so she can see ginny in action against Harry.....kutgw
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 10:11PM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
Well this one had an unexpectedly gory turn! Looks like a werewolf or a magical Jack the Ripper! Nice catch by Theia on the cauldron contents! Good thing Ginny has the right attitude about Harry and Theia! I really like a story that puts you on the edge of your seat!
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 06:44PM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
So excited to see an update, and a brief glimpse of Ginny, too! Squeeee! I was a little dismayed by Theia's reaction to the body. She really freaked out, which is understandable for a civilian, but as an Auror, even a first body, she had to know what she was getting into. Although, now that I think about it - wizard crime usually involves a wand. We never saw much else in canon other than werewolf attacks, or taking Harry's blood at the graveyard. Everything else was wand-related, so perhaps a bloody crime scene isn't all that common. Now I'm wondering why the culprit didn't use a wand. Hmm. Very interesting.
Reviewer: Mary-Bear Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 06:31PM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
Loooove! Very exciting chapter, but I need more hinny moments! Despite that is fantastic, very well written as always. Keep up the good work
Reviewer: BigFatMaybe Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 05:46PM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
Good chapter! I'm really enjoying your style of writing. It's got a rapid, good pace, and you've got a good balance between darkness and lightheartedness. Interesting characters, and your Harry is pretty true to canon, perhaps a bit cooler to fangirls though.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 05:44PM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
I love how you contrast the jaded Auror of three years with the wide-eyed horrified newbie in this chapter. Considering that Theia has been working with Harry less than a week, I think she's doing as well as can be expected. Loved Harry's comment about her needing to toughen up, but also that he's so understand and willing to tell her that she contributed to the investigation with her observations. Great chapter!
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 12:11PM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
Okay, Theia needs a new line of work if Harry can't do his job for worry that she'll fall apart. I understand that a crime scene would be traumatizing, but she has been through training, right? She should understand that she'll run into unpleasantness. Aurors hunt Dark Wizards, not give out parking tickets. She should have been able to pull it together after a minute, not freaking out the whole time. I thought she admired Harry and she would settle down and work, but she doesn't seem cut out to be an Auror.
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 11:59AM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
Belladonna in the eyes? How odd. Theia will need to get a stronger stomach if the author has a created a perp that is cutting up victims and removing hearts I think. The crime scene investigation fell a little short it seems. I know Theia became weak, but she could always have gone down the alley to Borgin and Burke's and browsed for bobbles and hobKnobs until Harry was all done.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 11:58AM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
lol. thank you for 10 minutes? brilliant. everything was so serious.... then so cold blooded and you ended up with thank yous for 10 minute. genius, that is...... ha ha ha ha ha!
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 11:05AM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
Another interesting chapter. Theia continues to be a bit of a flake, but she was finally able to contribute something to the case. It seems Harry even appreciated the input she had on what she saw at the scene of the crime. Could it be they will actually be able to become partners? Aside from Harry and Theia, I'm really curious about these crimes and what and who are behind it. Looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.03.03 - 09:32AM Title: Chapter Two: Belladonna
Oh wow, brilliant chapter!