Reviews For The Aurors
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.04.13 - 07:44AM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Wow, very disturbing at the end there. The Azkaban escape plot would have been a true nightmare for the Ministry if it had succeeded. Clearly the guards are just as useless as Harry accused them of being. Teddy is a welcome bit of relief from the darkness of the main plot of this story.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.03.13 - 05:07PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
So the plot thickeneths a lot! A foiled breakout at Azkaban and a captured deathmuncher! Interesting! It would seem the villain has a great dislike for deathmunchers! The gory manner of death would seem to indicate a werewolf or a vampire but looks can be deceiving, especially if you're trying to create a false trail! ! Can't wait to see what happens next! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2016.03.13 - 04:12PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Love this so far - there are never enough stories of this era to satisfy my taste. It seems there may be a few issues to work through between Harry and Ginny. Theia is definitely growing on me. I was a bit dubious at first when she kept wittering on, but she's showing some good qualities. As a Ravenclaw she should be bright enough to learn what she needs quickly, she's got initiative and seems quite fast with her wand. Obviously she has to learn to deal with the gore, but her comment 'It'll come' shows she could have the courage and determination to come good. She's already proved useful in the investigation and they could make a good team so I hope Harry gives her a chance, although to be fair it's a huge learning curve for him too. Hard to trust someone you've only just met. That last segment was horrible (in a good way). Wonder who the baddie is?
Reviewer: MisterBlack Signed Date: 2016.03.13 - 03:08PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
I love this. I have always loved stories that really focus on Harry as an Auror. I think more people should do it. You have so many things you can write about.
Reviewer: BigFatMaybe Signed Date: 2016.03.13 - 02:04PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Good chapter. Again, you write very well, with life-like characters. The brief glimpse in the end is a bit exciting as well, expecially as our bad guy turns a Death Eater into a sobbing mess.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.03.13 - 11:07AM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
You have got to be joking. Is that meet Livia Rookwood? Whoa! Is there another Voldy rising to power. Shockingly cruel. Love Teddy..
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.03.13 - 10:33AM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Oh the plot thickens...quite a twist at the end (and a bit ick if it's what I think it is)
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.03.13 - 01:41AM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Well then....is Dawlish feeding Rookwood his dead wife? Just hazarding a guess.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2016.03.12 - 07:31PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Whoa! That was a shocker of an ending! How disturbing. Seems as if the bad guy is someone who has something against the Death Eaters. How intriguing.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.03.12 - 04:39PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Ah someone is after the death eaters and thats ok but something tells me harry is still going to have his hands full...as for ginny she many need to kick harry in to gear and have him take a desk job soon or else she is not going to be happy....kutgw
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2016.03.12 - 04:13PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
It was great to see the new chapter today! New hints about the mysteries of this story but the whole thing isn't quite clear yet. Sounds like things are really messed up at Azkaban if this plot could have gotten as far as it did, though. I loved that Harry really took charge with the prison guards and Dawlish. Harry often has a temper, but here wasn't jus shouting, but was stepping up as an authority figure trying to fix a dangerous problem. Another good showing for Theia, too. It can be hard inserting OCs as main characters into a story based around such well established and beloved characters as this one, but I think you've done a great job here. I find myself really pulling for her to show her worth, and gain Harry's acceptance and respect. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.03.12 - 02:32PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Yippee! Another chapter! I've looked forward to this one all week and am glad you posted so soon. Since I love this story, it's like coming home to a friend.
Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2016.03.12 - 01:19PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Quite the conspiracy going on. Great end to the chapter too.
Reviewer: Hank Signed Date: 2016.03.12 - 01:12PM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Eeww! Yikes, it looks like Rookwood messed around with the wrong person...
Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2016.03.12 - 10:20AM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
An excellent chapter as always. Riviting! Wow, I'm glad that Robards has been made aware of the insubordination from the guards at Azkaban. Their lack of interest of their job is extremely dangereous when they are in close quarters with such terrible individuals!! Hmmm, just got to thinking, if the prisoners were going to poison their guards, then that means one would have to be "out" of their cells to do it, thus suggesting a person on the outside. Interesting. Hints at a possible guard or Auror as an accessory to a mass breakout. Hmm... The possiblilities...
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2016.03.12 - 09:38AM Title: Chapter Four: The Death Eater
Our first glimpse of the bad guys - very intriguing. The escape plans make a lot of sense as does Harry's rage at Dawlish. At best he was too malleable, at worst he was a collaborator. I don't understand those people wanting Dementors back - it seems crazy to me. They need to look at recruiting actual prison guards who are trained for that type of work. Theia seems to improve all the time. Harry did take a cheap shot at her, but I think if she didn't gush so much he wouldn't be quite so annoyed with her. Poor Ginny, Harry needs to take some time with her. Hopefully he'll be able to make it to her match.