Reviews For The Aurors
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.04.13 - 08:20AM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
Poor Pansy. Not that she was ever likable in the books, but what a horrible way to go. It is good to see Harry and Theia acting more like partners and working well together. I enjoyed the conversation between Harry and Neville about their relationships.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2016.03.29 - 02:44AM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
Theia did really well this time around. Harry is very sweet and awkward trying to be nice to her. I imagine a lot of Death Eater sympathizers would resent Harry and all of the changes taking place in the wizarding world. Harry would be a very easy person to blame for everything.
Reviewer: melipy Signed Date: 2016.03.24 - 07:19PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
I liked this chapter so much! The suspense of this case is increasing! For some reason, this chapter gave me the feels when it came to Harry and Ginny. Not just the part where Harry has been carrying the ring around for 6 months, but how Theia seemed so excited to talk about Ginny. They're this famous couple! I hope there's a chance for Theia to meet Ginny and get her chance to fangirl like she didn't let herself do with Harry. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.03.21 - 12:05PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
Really great chapter! I'm glad Theia is getting there with her blood phobia, and that she's doing some good work on the case and Harry is starting to respect her more. I really like her as a character and I'm looking forward to seeing her development.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.03.20 - 10:24PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
awwww.... the ring... Neville and Hannah.... tongues and hearts and teaching. what a combination. excellent.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.03.19 - 02:36PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
I think nevelle has given harry some sound and thought advice to follow....kutgw
Reviewer: BigFatMaybe Signed Date: 2016.03.19 - 09:08AM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
This story is really fun to read! It's good to see Harry in a bit of a better mood and trying to socialize with Theia (the bar scene was very good!). I am concerned for Harry and Ginny's relationship, though. Especially with the comments you made in the reviews. It will be interesting to see how you incorporate Theia in that.
Reviewer: hobbes64 Signed Date: 2016.03.19 - 01:53AM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
This is great fun, thanks for writing! I like Theia, I can identify with her more than Harry, I guess I am more Ravenclaw (see next paragraph of this review lol). You have a lot of interesting things going on here, with some foreshadowing (I think, obviously the body parts thing is going to be significant) and some nice worldbuilding on top of what is in the books. Also will Harry pop the question "on screen" in this story ?? We'll have to wait and see.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 06:11PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
Theia is definitely getting there and in the right place.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 05:11PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
Terrific chapter again! Another grisley murder, this time Pansy! This is beginning to sound like "Murders in the Rue Morgue" or a Frankenstein flick with Igor running around collecting body parts! Someone definitely has it in for death eaters of the female persuasion! The web of intrigue grows! Keep it coming! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: MisterBlack Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 03:42PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
This is turning out better than I thought it would. Theia is turning out to be one of the best things about this story. You can't help but look at her like a younger sister.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 03:25PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
I'm much happier with Harry in this chapter! He seems to have found some time to reflect on how he's been treating Theia and now knows he needs to give her constructive criticism rather than just being critical. His talk with Neville made me smile...to think the "great" Harry Potter is flummoxed about how to propose to his girl! Not very Gryffindor-ish, really.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 12:42PM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
I really like the development of Theia's character in this chapter, and the way her professional relationship with Harry is getting better. Add that to the mystery of what's going on with these murders and how its all tied to the attempted break out at Azkaban, and I'm really enjoying this story.
Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 10:56AM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
Reviewer: Hank Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 10:08AM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 09:23AM Title: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues
I'm a horrible reviewer. But wanted to drop by and let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. I'm really enjoying the characters, I like how Theia is toughing up too. Harry seems to be coming around where she is concerned. Very much looking forward to the next update.