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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.04.09 - 12:59AM Title: Part 1
Very interesting. I like the little mystery in only a couple of chapters.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's not a very substantial mystery, but that's alright with me. Hopefully you will like the ending!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.04.05 - 05:26PM Title: Part 1
what/ a cliffhanger? just when it is getting all exciting? when is the enxt part up? great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I just put up the conclusion, I hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2016.04.05 - 04:38AM Title: Part 1
Nice to see a new little mystery. As its a 2 parter Wilbur may just be innocent - look forward to reading Ginny's reaction to the news.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! There's not too much going on here, and you can probably predict where it is going, but I thought it was fun. Hope you like the end!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.04.04 - 07:04PM Title: Part 1
Interesting. Unlikely to be Wilbur. Why the difference in seriousness between the first event and the next two? Next chapter please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As I told someone else, the first event was so destructive because that was the only one where Ginny was actually there, and as I think we already see, she is the main target. Hope you like the ending.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.04.04 - 10:45AM Title: Part 1
Ooh! A two-part mystery. I like Ginny's hunch that these incidents have something to do with her and for some reason, I think poor Wilber isn't the culprit. Anxiously waiting for the next part and hoping it will appear soon. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think you might just be right! I just put in the second part, hope you like it.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2016.04.04 - 10:43AM Title: Part 1
An interesting first chapter. All these events do seem connected to Ginny, but why was the first event so much different from the following ones? You've got me really curious as to what's going on.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! They way that I think about it, Ginny was only actually present at the first event, and that was the most destructive. Whoever is behind this knew that she was there, but was unsure about the others. Destruction is saved for special occasions only.
