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Reviewer: indywriter Signed
Date: 2018.05.02 - 09:36PM
Title: Part 2
This was a fast-paced, fun story! I'm off to read more of your stuff (you compared one to Castle, my other great love after HP...). I'm looking forward to seeing what else you've written :)
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2016.04.26 - 01:24AM
Title: Part 2
Wonderful. I really enjoyed this story.
Thankyou.
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2016.04.24 - 08:10AM
Title: Part 2
To right she does,....kutgw
Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2016.04.18 - 07:33AM
Title: Part 2
Cute story, although in reality, Ginny would probably have been in a lot of trouble for doing what she did. It's nice to know that all's well that ends well.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. In real life, Ginny would have gotten in trouble for most of her actions in this story. Good thing it isn't real life.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2016.04.18 - 06:10AM
Title: Part 2
Feels a little incomplete. Why would her half brother go so far to protect Maeve?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hmm, I suppose I could have given a bit more of an explanation, but if I do too much I worry about patronizing the reader into thinking that they need every last detail explained to them and that they are unable to fill in the blanks on their own. I don't want to do that. I don't think that it is an outlandish concept that half-siblings could be close enough that one would want to cover up for another in a dangerous situation. I certainly know that is true of siblings, and I have known some half-siblings to be as close as birth ones. But I suppose that can differ for each person's situation.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2016.04.17 - 06:49PM
Title: Part 2
lol. enjoyed the story. counsel is the person who represents and council is the group.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Ugh, thought I had caught all the mistakes, but thanks for catching this one for me. Changed it!
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