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Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2016.04.18 - 07:48AM Title: Chapter 2

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Your pace is breathtaking. I really like it. But I also hope that Harry and Ginny will soon find time to talk about their new situation. I'm wondering why the trace isn't canceled on the two of them yet.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.04.17 - 06:31PM Title: Chapter 2

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So, have they just found the real Albus. That would explain a few things. Sirius is great so far in this story, but I was rather hoping for more of a wedding night scene.



Reviewer: MisterBlack Signed Date: 2016.04.16 - 12:59AM Title: Chapter 2

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Things continue to happen at a quick pace. I find it difficult to believe Ginny and Harry would go on without feeling the least bit guilty for what they have done regardless of the peculiar behavior exhibited by Molly and Albus.

With that said... they are now married and they have had sex. Okay. So what are going to be the implications for that? Will Harry and Ginny eventually return to Hogwarts? If they do then how will that affect their marriage?

How can Harry be a Lord and be married but would still need to worry about the trace placed on him? I would assume that he would be considered for the lack of a better term, an adult, and therefore would be able to practice magic with no worries about receiving letters from the Ministry.

I would imagine that Albus and Molly are going frantic over their disappearance. I would not be surprised to learn that he has alerted the Order of the events and promptly set out to look for them.

There are just so many questions and I have not even begun to question on the main story itself. It seems very fast paced but I do hope it slows down so we can get some answers.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2016.04.15 - 04:10PM Title: Chapter 2

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Wow! That's quite the surprise! What's Dumbledore doing in Grindelwald's prison? Another good chapter.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.04.15 - 01:44PM Title: Chapter 2

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Another goodie! BTW, i believe once Harry and Ginny were married they become legal adults and the trace drops, especially since they consumated it! Can't wait to see who the phony Dumbledore is! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.04.15 - 07:25AM Title: Chapter 2

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the greatest prank ever... true words
It's funny that Harry has planned everything out but he is surprised about sharing the room with Ginny now... and the other implications of being married, lol.
Many thanks for another exciting chapter.

Author's Response: Yes... I always felt Harry, though a regular teenage boy, was still more noble than most his peers. While many would take advantage of this situation, to me, it's the kind of thing that wouldn't even occur to him, not that he wasn't interested in Ginny in that way. Anyway, thanks for the review and compliments. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.




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