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Reviewer: MisterBlack Signed Date: 2016.08.03 - 04:27AM Title: Chapter 8: The Pupil

Oh, come on! Stop being such a tease! You write up this amazing story and feed us little grains here and there enough to entice our curiosity but you never give us anything big!

It was just getting good and you stop! I feel like Harry right now.

Honestly though I have no idea what to think of Melchior. Selene seems like she is a fun girl but it is obvious she has trauma of her own. As for Harry and Ginny just simply forgetting about Melchior's secret... I don't know. I am a little suspicious here. Could they have been drugged or manipulated somehow? I mean why would they just suddenly forget about it?

Forgetting Daphne is obviously something that will not happen naturally. She seems to be well engraved in Harry's heart. Something will have to happen , right? Perhaps he learns some new facts about her or perhaps a certain little red head comes running from left field and steals him away?

I am still somewhat lost on what exactly is happening and what it is they are going to do. What is their end goal really? They just cannot run for the rest of their lives.

Author's Response: Oh you want something big, do you? Be careful what you wish for ;) Don't worry, Ginny will capture Harry's heart. Patience is a virtue, but sadly, Ginny isn't known to be patient and cool.

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Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.07.15 - 07:03PM Title: Chapter 8: The Pupil

Really enjoyed the info on Melchior's life! But you're a real rat for leaving us hanging on what happened to Caterina! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: hey, yet another review by you! Appreciate it a lot, even if you call me a rat! But I'm sorry to say that I'll be playing rat some more in the future. ;)

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Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2016.07.14 - 11:20AM Title: Chapter 8: The Pupil

Back story is nice, but it's really slowing done the pacing. However, they are stuck in a house in the middle of nowhere. I guess they decided to stay and not plan an escape?

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you for the honest review. I do appreciate it! The backstory to Melchior's life isn't just there to give colour to the story, though, it's pretty integral to how the story will develop. Also, a few chapters back (chapter 6) you can read what Sirius said about 'escaping' or not: ""Alright,� he said eventually. “We stay here until it gets warmer, and then we'll decide whether we want to stay or not."" I hope that answers your question.

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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.07.13 - 05:04PM Title: Chapter 8: The Pupil

I'm glad that Ginny and Harry at least began to look for answers to Melchiors background. The firewhisky scene was hilarious. I think the idea was typical for Ginny. Someone who's sneaking out in the night to fly on borrowed brooms will also take a swig if the bottle is within reach, lol. As I said before, I like this Ginny. A lot.

Oh, and by the way, in my recent review I've asked you if your name is Melchior because you reveal the secrets of your story just as fast as Melchior reveals his secrets. ;-)
At least I think that I slowly get a feeling about Melchiors motifs. I suppose that Caterina has something to do with it. But I think at some point he should ask the three of them, if they accept his help and support voluntary. Up to now they don't have another choice.
Great chapter! Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad so many people liked the firewhiskey scene. And yes, I do feel some sympathy for Melchior. Keeping secrets from you for this long is hard! We'll see if the next 3 chapters will confirm your suspicions!

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