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Reviewer: MisterBlack Signed Date: 2016.08.03 - 05:11AM Title: Chapter 9: Hearts on Fire

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Damn.

Now this is what I am talking about. The story is really picking up now. Oh, man... this is GREAT! I absolutely love the picture you painted on how the war began and how it escalated. I find JK Rowling to be an amazing author but not even she did such a good job in that regard. You really made it scary as it should be.

It is obvious that Melchior has learned a lot from that war and in a way he is teaching them to fight like Voldemort would... in the shadows.

Okay but I am really confused now and that probably has to do with time passing by since I read the first few chapters. So apparently Harry did not know about the Fidelius charm but he still trusted Sirius?

I would imagine if he believed Sirius to be innocent then the story must be told and he must understand about the Fidelius charm and how it works and how he wasn't the traitor.

Either way... this just proves something else. If Fred and George had been following Ginny and Harry around then it is safe to assume that they know the truth and that Harry did not kidnap Ginny. She obviously went on her own accord and obviously trusted Sirius, right?

AM I being too hopeful? Fred and George got to know Harry in school so they must know he is not evil or anything.

Author's Response: Yeah, we're nearing the end now. Hang in there! I'm glad you liked the start of the war. I always liked the history classes about the world wars. Yes, Melchior has learnt a lot, but has he seen too much? About Harry trusting Sirius: it's a combination of Harry desperately wanting family and Sirius not telling the full details of the story. But we'll go into more detail on that encounter later in the story at some point. Don't worry! About Fred and George: don't you ever have a lot of negative thoughts about feeling alone in this world, and then someone does something for you and it warms your heart beyond imagining? Yeah, I think Harry's due for something like that. He tends to think a bit negatively about other peoples' perception of him.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.07.22 - 07:36PM Title: Chapter 9: Hearts on Fire

A lot of action in this one! And more info about Melchior and Selene! There has to be a reason Melchior is being so hard on Harry and Ginny! Great cliffy at the end with the rat at Hagrid's! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Ayy the double whammy



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.07.22 - 07:35PM Title: Chapter 9: Hearts on Fire

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A lot of action in this one! And more info about Melchior and Selene! There has to be a reason Melchior is being so hard on Harry and Ginny! Great cliffy at the end with the rat at Hagrid's! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you! There definitely is a reason Melchior is pushing those poor kids so hard.



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2016.07.21 - 04:11AM Title: Chapter 9: Hearts on Fire

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I suppose that the training for Ginny and Harry is finished now, or at least for a while, and that very soon other problems will dominate their daily life. I wonder if the last carefree day in Harry's life means the last day in your story or in his whole life. I take it that he'll survive your tale...

It's not a complain, but I pondered a while to find out how the title of the chapter might be connected to actual content...and I still haven't a clue.

I wonder if we'll find out a bit more about the circumstances of the friendship between Ginny and Harry in the first part of your tale, and what role Daphne really plays in it. Is she simply the antagonist to Ginny from Harry's point of view? I don't think so. But I'm pretty sure that we'll see anytime soon, latest in the second part of your tale,lol.

Great chapter! Thank you.

Author's Response: And thank you for your review! I like the Rocky movies. The other questions will be answered in the coming chapters.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.07.20 - 03:31PM Title: Chapter 9: Hearts on Fire

Oh boy the map has done it again....kutgw



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.07.17 - 04:03PM Title: Chapter 9: Hearts on Fire

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Goodness what a cliffhanger! I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Very well done indeed. I am looking forward to Pettigrew hopefully being caught and exposed as the scum he is soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! We're nearly done with part 1 now. The next chapter should come out tomorrow.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.07.16 - 09:16PM Title: Chapter 9: Hearts on Fire

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I wonder if Harry will have a peek into Melchior's diary, or if he's contented with Melchior's latest revelations. Anyhow, I suppose that those revelations could be the first step to real trust between the trio and the duo.

Now that the surroundings of their quarters are becoming more inviting due to the upcoming springtime, something tells me that they'll leave anytime soon. And, according to the statement that "it was the last carefree day in Harry's life", I suppose that things will get worse soon.

Many thanks for another great chapter. It seems that the pace is slowly getting faster.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the praise! Yes, that comment was there for a reason. You'll see why very soon...




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