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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2016.07.23 - 07:59PM
Title: Chapter 10: Leroy Jenkins
I hope harry and buckbeak make it to the rock safely but something tells me siruis and ginny are both in big trouble at the moment.....everyone should have gone ont he mission but i understand why they didnt.....kutgw
Author's Response: Oh, there's big surprise coming... thanks!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2016.07.23 - 05:21AM
Title: Chapter 10: Leroy Jenkins
Seems that the story gains momentum now. A lot happened in this chapter that will probably determine the further course of events in the story.
Sirius wasn't helpful at all when the Aurors appeared. He should've trained with Ginny and Harry instead of lazing around all winter. I hope that the Auror who executed Ginny with this head shot has to suffer for his atrocity later in the story. Now I'm afraid that Ginny will be out of the story for a longer time. OK, Harry won't miss her very much. He's quite self centered and busy whining about Daphne most of the time.
I'm just pondering, at which point in the story we are now. Apparently, it's still the same situation as at the end of chapter one, only that the trio is a duo now, supposing that Sirius is able to flee. Considering that Ginny is more reasonable than the other two together the situation is even worse. But maybe Selene still has a surprise at her sleeves. We will see...
All in all it's been a great chapter. thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you for the extensive review! We're nearly at the end of part 1 of 3. No, Sirius wasn't helpful at all, but that also has something to do with Harry's usual antics. I mean, fighting 12 Aurors head on? What a guy. As for Harry missing Ginny, they do say that you don't know what you have until it's gone. About that Auror who stunned her like that getting his comeuppance: you have no idea ;).
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed
Date: 2016.07.22 - 07:50PM
Title: Chapter 10: Leroy Jenkins
As Oliver Hardy would say, well here's another fine mess you've gotten us into! Harry is gone to safety, Sirius is missing and who knows about Ginny! This might be the mother of all cliffhangers! And who in the heck is Leroy Jenkins? :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! Leroy Jenkins is a legend. If you google him, you'll find a great youtube video.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2016.07.22 - 07:09PM
Title: Chapter 10: Leroy Jenkins
Great chapter! Definitely a lot of action here. It seemed that Harry was able to escape, but I am concerned about Sirius. Poor Ginny is probably not in a good state either. At least Hermione and perhaps Ron have a small awareness of the truth at this point. Looking forward to reading your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! We're nearing the end of part 1 here. Next update should be next Tuesday.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2016.07.22 - 06:38PM
Title: Chapter 10: Leroy Jenkins
Excellent chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it.
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed
Date: 2016.07.22 - 01:07PM
Title: Chapter 10: Leroy Jenkins
Excellent chapter! The trio of outlaws has been separated now, and it appears Harry is heading back to Melchior's cabin. I am disappointed only by the fact your chapter title was a ruse! Long live Leroy Jenkins!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! I thought the chapter title was appropriate for Sirius' attitude this chapter. Long live Leroy Jenkins.
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