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Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2016.08.01 - 06:35AM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
Oh, this was a surprising end. I think Ginny was hit hardest of them. I suspect that neither the Ministry nor Molly will treat her well. I hope that she can somehow sneak away. And what about Selene?
And now I wait impatiently for the second part.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.07.28 - 08:30AM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
Excellent tale.
As all the other reviewers have asked the questions, I don't think I will repeat them.
The only thing to say is...Please upload the next part, soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll do my best!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.07.26 - 10:57AM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
It seems that we have more questions than answers after the first part of your tale.
I'm curious how you'll get Ginny back into the game. Will Selene free her, and bring her to one of Melchior's other houses? And maybe Harry and Sirius, too? Or will Ginny escape on her own? But how will she find Harry and Sirius? But why should she look for them at the first place? I don't think that Harry will try the free Ginny. He is too busy bragging with his shield spells and how'd escaped. And Sirius is a nursing case of his own. I don't think that he'll be of help. He is the one who needs help. I don't trust his abilities.
Melchior's death was a real surprise. Somehow I have the feeling that Selene will be the key to reunite the trio now.
I'm curious what Daphne has written in her letter to Harry? Is it a farewell letter? I hope that we'll know soon...
And, even more important, I'm curious when you'll reveal the secret behind Ginny's and Harry's friendship. Although I must admit that I'm at a point now where I think that Ginny deserves someone better than Harry. She will always feel like the distant second if Harry will really notice her sometime in the remote future.
Who was in Melchior's hut during the explosion? Certainly, someone between nobody and all of the Aurors. I hope that the Norwegian Ministry has the spine to call for a punishment of the Aurors.
Anyway, a big THANK YOU for the first part of an intriguing tale. I sincerely hope that the next couple of month will be a busy time for you so you'll provide us with all the badly needed information very soon ;-)
(btw., the story is still marked as not completed.)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I really appreciate extensive reviews like this one! But I'm afraid you'll have to wait for the answers. Rest assured, the story will unfold, and we'll see soon enough just why it belongs on siye.co.uk! Hope to see you back for the next part!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.07.26 - 07:32AM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
Wow, quite the action packed ending. Melchior's death was sudden and horrible. I'm glad that Selene was elsewhere, although I don't know how or when Harry and Sirius will manage to reconnect with her. Then, of course they still have Ginny to worry about. They are still wanted men, and I can't imagine where they will go now. You left us with so many questions. Did Tonks perish in the blast? How many aurors were still in the house when it blew up? Some, all? I guess my biggest immediate concern is Ginny. Can her family protect her from the Ministry? Looking forward to the next section of this story.
Author's Response: The first chapter of part 2 should answer most of the questions you asked here, so clench those buttcheeks tight! It's coming along, but it does take some time.
Author's Response: The first chapter of part 2 should answer most of the questions you asked here, so clench those buttcheeks tight! It's coming along, but it does take some time.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.07.26 - 05:27AM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
Author's Response: ...and the empty space to finish it off. Perfect!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.07.26 - 05:26AM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
Author's Response: And 5 stars woo!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.07.26 - 05:25AM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
Big ending.
Author's Response: Thanks! But it's just the beginning... ;)
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.07.26 - 12:03AM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
Noooo! A cliffhanger? With BFM pulling a GRRM on completion time....smh, lol
You should be quite pleased with your work so far.
Regarding the last chapter, I was expecting an actual outcry of Leeeeroy Jaaankins. It would have been completely asinine in the context of the story, but that much funnier.
Author's Response: Long live cliffhangers! Thank you for the compliment! But I'd like to keep the story at least mildly serious. Jokes are for in the reviews and chapter titles.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.07.25 - 04:53PM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
So you just killed tonks off with everyone else....wow you do have it cold for everyone agasit harry at the moment....hope peter was caught in the blast.....kutgw
Author's Response: We'll see soon enough happened to Peter. And if you think this was evil, well...
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.07.25 - 02:00PM Title: Chapter 11: Awry
Holy cow! This isn't awry it's one BIG FAT MESS! The Aurors murdered Melchior(sniff) but I hope Harry didn't actually kill Tonks! This may be the mother of all cliffhangers! Harry and Sirius are fugitives again, Ginny is stuck at Hogwarts, Selene doesn't have a clue her father figure is dead and we all have to suffer angst until the next installment! Evil you are! ;) :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you for reading! The next part is coming along (slowly).
