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Reviewer: Cole Signed Date: 2016.08.07 - 10:16PM Title: Chapter 5
I personally feel like Ginny being quite as angry as she is about Harry's decision for as long as she is (and her reasoning for it) seem a little OoC (compared to canon) as does Harry's ability to sooth her fears at the end of the chapter but that's just my opinion. Not that was have a ton of material after the war to base that on, the reactions are still understandable and believable, just not what I'd envisioned. All in all, I'm still greatly enjoying the story so far!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.07.08 - 12:04AM Title: Chapter 5
Very good chapter.
Glad Ginny finally came round and talked to Harry. If she had of done that weeks ago, none of the wasted time would have happened.
Now for Ron.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.07.07 - 08:43AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm a bit disappointed in how long it took Ginny to talk to Harry. Once again time together has been lost because of their difficult behavior. I do understand her being upset about them being separated for a year though.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.07.07 - 05:59AM Title: Chapter 5
Well harry may have finally got ginny on board but harry was right in some respects and ginny was right in some others....kutgw
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.07.07 - 12:36AM Title: Chapter 5
yay an update. well done, you. love the chaper.
