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Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2018.09.07 - 12:08PM Title: Chapter 9

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If I'm not wrong Dean had Walkman that almost instantly died around magic. Battery or plug, it's still electronics that doesn't work around magic. Otherwise all muggleborn kids would have CD players, electronic games etc. at Hogwarts.



Reviewer: Cole Signed Date: 2016.08.07 - 10:41PM Title: Chapter 9

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Best line: β€œIt’s a Dirigible plum,”

LOL. Loving the story so far!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.07.26 - 08:01AM Title: Chapter 9

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Excellent chapter.
While it is sad to have them separate, they will both survive and be better for it. As Ron said, "True love knows no distance."
Loved the last bit and conversation.
Looking forward to the next one.



Reviewer: Aniket Chowdhury Signed Date: 2016.07.23 - 11:42AM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.07.22 - 07:32PM Title: Chapter 9

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Very sweet and rather sad. It is so hard to say goodbye and they will be apart for such a long time.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.07.22 - 04:02PM Title: Chapter 9

Yes i bet that harry is having second thoughts but ginny is the one who really dose not want to go and see the school again....harry is going to have fun but it is going to take time to figure it all out....kutgw



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2016.07.22 - 01:08PM Title: Chapter 9

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This chapter was so sweet but so sad at the same time.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.07.22 - 09:16AM Title: Chapter 9

sorry.... genius not venius and since not sisince.... your last paragraph is excellent as a way of ending the rather long winded conversation....very good writing technique.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.07.22 - 09:14AM Title: Chapter 9

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I like the way you wrote your last paragraph. It was abrupt but also venius sisnce you had written very long conversations between Harry and Ginny which I skimmed through at times but the last paragraph was a shocker for want of a better description. I cannot wait to see how you will proceed from here.....




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