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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.07.25 - 09:57AM Title: Chapter 2: Preparation

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Interesting and different type of story.
I'm not sure on the timing in your story, but hopefully, it will become clear as the story goes on.
Looking forward to where you take it.

Author's Response: Hopefully the timeline of the story becomes clearer in the next few chapters. I'm very much a believer of feeding the audience tidbits of information slowly over time to build a story and its atmosphere, rather than dumping a whole load of information on them all at once. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far...thanks for your review!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.07.21 - 07:06AM Title: Chapter 2: Preparation

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Why had "Voldemort been at the height of his powers some 19 years ago" if he had not had the usual run in with Harry? Where was he and how old is Harry? Still very different.

Author's Response: Hopefully the next chapter adequately answers your question :)



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.07.20 - 07:39PM Title: Chapter 2: Preparation

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Fascinating story. You are certainly succeeding in telling a very dark tale. So, they are attacking the Prewett House first. I imagine this is Molly's family. Greyback is an excellent choice when the goal is fear and chaos. I am very curious to see where this story is going.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.07.20 - 02:31AM Title: Chapter 2: Preparation

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Ooh, interesting chapter
I don't think I've read anything like this before
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Glad you liked it!!



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2016.07.20 - 12:42AM Title: Chapter 2: Preparation

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Wow, so that is very, VERY different from anything I have read before. Since it is posted here, I am sure we are in for quite the roller-coaster ride! Well, bring it on I have buckled my seat belt and can't wait to see where you take us with this!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think the story is original! I hope you continue to like it.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.07.19 - 11:37PM Title: Chapter 2: Preparation

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This is a very interesting juxtaposition of flashback and present. With just the small beginning scene it's easy to see how Draco's arrogance led him to discount others and concentrate on his own importance, much to the detriment of his family. It will be an interesting read when Draco finally is in place because he now has motivation to actually succeed in killing Dumbledore.

Keep the chapters coming. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2016.07.19 - 08:56PM Title: Chapter 2: Preparation

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Another excellent chapter! It's interesting to see the intricacies of Voldemorts regime and Harry's heavy responsibilities. Since Harry Didnt stop Vodemort, obviously the wizarding world is a much darker and different place. It'll be interesting to see how ypuve imagined the world. I enjoyed this chapter, even though it is mostly setting up the story, it is interesting all the same. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.07.19 - 07:31PM Title: Chapter 2: Preparation

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The plot thickens. Harry as a political leader for the Death Eaters, offering redemption to the Malfoys. Also a little display of his natural talents in setting branches ablaze. Looking forward to more.




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