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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.18 - 08:40PM Title: Chapter 7: The Path to War

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Poor Molly. I truly cannot imagine the pain she is going through facing the loss of her home immediately following the loss of her family. You did not make it entirely clear who was killed in the attack on the Prewett home, but I am suspecting that you meant Molly's brothers and possibly a wife or girlfriend. Well written and compelling story, even if it is exceptionally dark.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 08:36AM Title: Chapter 7: The Path to War

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I have just reread this story as RL has got in the way, again.
This story is pretty good. But there must be something big that happens to Harry. At the moment, he is pretty grey or light dark.
I'm glad Ginny has, finally, entered the story.
It is sad that the Burrow is going to be sacrificed, but it does seem like the obvious place for the ultimate fight.
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2016.10.25 - 04:03AM Title: Chapter 7: The Path to War

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I reckon that Harry isn't as dark as he seems to be. Otherwise there is no chance that this could ever be an H/G story. It seems you got me on the hook.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.10.19 - 04:51PM Title: Chapter 7: The Path to War

Sorry, I wasn't my intention to pressure you, but somehow I just couldn't resist.
The attacks on the Burrow are planned in two days and I'd just hoped that you're earlier than the Daily Prophet. ;-)



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.10.19 - 03:54PM Title: Chapter 7: The Path to War

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You are going to have to be very clever to get this turned round.

Author's Response: How do you mean?



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.10.19 - 08:19AM Title: Chapter 7: The Path to War

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I'm glad that Ginny has finally entered the stage.
She's waiting so impatiantly for her baptism of fire. I reckon that she'll get what she wants in the next chapter. And somehow I've the feeling that a screaming redhead, enveloped in green lights, could be the end of the Harry Voldemort knows. I'm already quite fidgety in anticipation!

Great chapter! I loved it. It'll take two days before we know more, you said? ;)

Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed it! Two days might be a tad optimistic but Ill try to get the next one up ASAP. Thanks again!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.10.18 - 08:32PM Title: Chapter 7: The Path to War

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Now this is getting really interesting! I hate to see them use the Burrow, but it's a believable choice! Harry is having nightmares about his mother but doesn't realize it! Poor Sirius and Remus are facing a real dilemma with having to face Harry! Can't wait to see what happens when Harry and certain red head see each other for the first time! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: I know! The Burrow is just such a homely and peaceful place, but war is war. Thanks for another lovely review!




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