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Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2018.07.22 - 05:24PM Title: Chapter 9: Traitor
The second part of the prophecy seems too direct. You only needed to add "..and her name should start with G...", because there still possible can be another redhead.
Wonder why the didn't just carry portkeys with them, would be easier to escape.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2017.01.19 - 11:33AM Title: Chapter 9: Traitor
Glad to see another chapter so soon. Dumbledore has been keeping secrets again I think - a leopard will never change it's spots. This chapter actually wasn't as dark as I expected it to be from the story warnings. Looking forward to seeing how Ginny will change Harry. :)
Author's Response: Dumbledore is always up to something. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.01.19 - 05:38AM Title: Chapter 9: Traitor
Great chapter.
Although it wasn't great to read the dark part and what Harry did to Ginny, I know it was needed for the story to be correct in its flow.
Looking forward to reading how Ginny 'turns' Harry towards the light.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.01.19 - 05:38AM Title: Chapter 9: Traitor
Great chapter.
Although it wasn't great to read the dark part and what Harry did to Ginny, I know it was needed for the story to be correct in its flow.
Looking forward to reading how Ginny 'turns' Harry towards the light.
Author's Response: We'll be seeing a lot more of Ginny and Harry over the coming chapters. Thanks for your review!!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.01.19 - 04:10AM Title: Chapter 9: Traitor
I'm glad we've crossed the darkest point in the story, and that we finally know the content of the prophecy. I'm pretty sure now that Dumbledore has at least hoped that Ginny will be captured. Was the end of the chapter already the first step into the lighter part? I hope so.
Oh, and I wish Harry that he is plagued by those terrible dreams he fears so much - about a certain red-haired woman.
As difficult as it always is to me to give such a dark Harry the full rating, in this case I have no other choice because it's worth it.
Great update! Thank you!
Author's Response: It begins to get a bit lighter in tone from her on in. The dreams do have a certain significance which will slowly be revealed. Thank you for a lovely review!!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.18 - 08:50PM Title: Chapter 9: Traitor
I'm very glad that this is as dark as this story will get! It is difficult to imagine Ginny ever forgiving Harry for what he has done to her and others. The second part of the prophecy was certainly interesting, but I am still wondering what it all means for Harry's possible redemption.
Author's Response: More to be revealed in the coming chapters. Thanks!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.01.18 - 06:36PM Title: Chapter 9: Traitor
Wow! you weren't kidding about getting another chapter out quick! Loved it! Moldyshorts didn't have to be a rocket scientist to figure out Snape was the traitor! If I had been Harry I wouldn't have let Greyback off so easy! Hate to see Harry hurt Ginny like that but I can see why it was needed for your plot, especially after the rest of the prophecy was revealed! Glad to see I was right about the power of love! Can't wait for the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: RMT1161 Signed Date: 2017.01.18 - 12:47PM Title: Chapter 9: Traitor
Awesome story. Good to see two chapters so close together, I hope the writing continues to go well.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
