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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.07.26 - 09:36PM Title: Chapter 10: Harry's Captive

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I wonder what caused his pain? It is interesting that Harry remembers his mother's death. I hope it will help humanize him and leave him vulnerable to Ginny's charms.



Reviewer: RwriterR Signed Date: 2017.01.30 - 01:53PM Title: Chapter 10: Harry's Captive

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I loved the dialogue in this chapter between Harry and Ginny. Kutgw



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.26 - 04:23PM Title: Chapter 10: Harry's Captive

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Great chapter! I am so frustrated with Harry and so impressed by Ginny's calm sense of self. The conversation between the two was very well done. I truly hope Albus's plan is successful. Ginny definitely needs to be rescued and Harry needs something (an intervention perhaps).



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.01.26 - 04:19AM Title: Chapter 10: Harry's Captive

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Apparently, we're approaching the turning point step by step. After I'd hoped that the turning point would be reached during the attack on the Burrow, now I'm hoping that it'll happen during the mission to rescue Ginny. You certainly know how to build up tension.

With all the plotting and scheming Albus, I have so many middle names, Dumbledore must feel like a duck in the water.

Many thanks for another intriguing chapter!



Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2017.01.25 - 11:39PM Title: Chapter 10: Harry's Captive

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Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.01.25 - 06:59PM Title: Chapter 10: Harry's Captive

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This was an eye opening chapter! Hate to see Ginny get tortured again but Harry is starting to crack because of it! He is tortured by his mother's screaming which Ginny's screams dredged up! Wonder what he'll think when he learns the truth! Can't wait for them to fall in love! Thanks for another installment! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.01.25 - 06:44PM Title: Chapter 10: Harry's Captive

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Good chapter.



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.01.25 - 05:12PM Title: Chapter 10: Harry's Captive

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Okay, so life hasn't given me the couple of hours I need to read this properly other than what I've needed to do for chapter validation, but...

That was a hell of a well written chapter!




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