Reviews For The Road not Taken
Reviewer: BrianMcLyr Signed Date: 2016.12.17 - 12:14AM Title: Chapter 13 Pettigrew's Revenge
Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2016.08.16 - 10:12PM Title: Chapter 13 Pettigrew's Revenge
Is there really so much distance between Hogwarts and Hogsmeade that screams would not be heard? Since Harry could hear them and was hidden out of sight from where Sirius was tortured, it's unlikely he used any privacy charms.
Reviewer: jerryfs2 Signed Date: 2016.08.10 - 02:58AM Title: Chapter 13 Pettigrew's Revenge
Brilliant story so far keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.08.09 - 05:50AM Title: Chapter 13 Pettigrew's Revenge
I was wondering, how you would let this year come to an end. You had to find something new, because the showdown of PoA doesn't fit into the story. Pettigrew's revenge was a really good idea. I am sure that Sirius will be more careful in future whenever he's out with Harry.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.08.08 - 09:37PM Title: Chapter 13 Pettigrew's Revenge
Very eventful chapter! How horrible that Harry was captured and tortured by Pettigrew. He and Sirius seem to have survived and escaped mostly by sheer will. I am glad to see Harry, Ron and Hermione talking again like friends. Harry and Ginny being a couple doesn't mean he should exclude his friends from his life. Remus did well apologizing for his actions. While he certainly didn't mean to be helping Pettigrew, his sorrow over the event helped everyone.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.08.08 - 07:56PM Title: Chapter 13 Pettigrew's Revenge
Wow! What a terrific chapter and full of action! Glad to see the trio re-connecting and including Ginny! You weren't kidding about Peter not staying caught! I hope that fat rat's demise is sooner rather than later and they get the traitor who freed him! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.08.08 - 04:09PM Title: Chapter 13 Pettigrew's Revenge
Hagrid and fang will have fun witht he puppy...as for harry not trusting remus is not a surprise, but then again siruis has known him a little longer....but why did peter let them escape....something smeels fishy here....as for hermione she is getting better but i think she still needs an little more adjustments but she at lease is seeing the light....kutgw
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2016.08.08 - 04:05PM Title: Chapter 13 Pettigrew's Revenge
Well done. Nice to see Harry and Ron both keep Quidditch at the top of their priorities... and that Hermione doesn't get it!