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Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.10.10 - 01:41PM Title: Chapter 9 Gringotts

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Greatly admiring the power of your minimalist writing -- a skill I will never acquire.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.08.29 - 07:54AM Title: Chapter 9 Gringotts

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Poor Anna, the blow of fate hits her at increasingly shorter intervals. I'm still anmazed that she'ss been sorted into Gryffindor house because she often acts like a typical Slytherin and most probably is Zalazars heiress. I wonder if the Goblins know that Anna is the Heiress of Slytherin, and what it means for her if Tom Riddle is defeated someday in the future.
Many thanks for another interesting chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, Anna is certainly having to survive some truly tragic events. She does have some very Slytherin tendencies. Fortunately, the sorting hat seems to take preferences into account! I'm not certain what kind of information the goblins could have access to. They have always seemed slightly mysterious to me, at least from how JKR portrayed them in the books. Thank you so much for the review!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.08.24 - 07:23PM Title: Chapter 9 Gringotts

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Had to be a hard chapter to write but well done! Anna is somewhat of mystery as she seems to know things nobody else does like what is in her dad's vault! I'll be interested to learn more about her! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Anna is definitely a bit of a mystery, as are some of the objects her grandmother left her in sealed trunks. More will be revealed over the next few chapters!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.08.24 - 11:46AM Title: Chapter 9 Gringotts

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Well things just keep on getting more and more interesting
Anna is certainly keeping her cards close to her chest. I look forward to reading more

Author's Response: Yes indeed! Anna is being very careful. Thank you for reviewing!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.08.24 - 11:16AM Title: Chapter 9 Gringotts

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You've actually answered at least part of my questions about Anna's ritual of cutting her palm. I'm grateful the Hermione didn't decide to use such anchors while keeping herself, Ron and Harry safe during the Horcrux hunt. While it seems that this ritual is indeed powerful magic, it's still a bit scary in that I don't think Augusta would have been able to find Anna if she'd gone looking for her that night.

I've always found it fun to write the Gringotts goblins and you've done a very nice job of it here. I'm glad Gornuk appreciated Anna's reluctance to divulge her secrets as well as her respect for his accounting of her holdings to chuckle at her cleverness. I've never encountered a chuckling goblin in fan fiction until this story. This one was refreshing!

Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a lovely review! I really enjoyed writing the scene with Gornuk. The Gringotts goblins are very interesting characters. I'm glad this latest ritual answered some of your questions. I actually rewrote some of that scene due to your suggestion in a previous review. And, you're quite correct Augusta would have been hard pressed to find Anna.




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