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Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.10.23 - 01:31PM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow

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I've gone a few chapters without feeling that I had anything particularly useful to say. I've been carried along by curiosity; shedding misconceptions as I went along.

At this point, I do think I can add one meaningful statement to the record though, which is that your story here had proven to be much more mysterious and norm-challenging than I would ever have guessed twelve chapters ago.

I believe it is a sincere compliment to say that I have no clue where this is all headed :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is indeed a lovely compliment! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.09.26 - 10:22AM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow

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Charlie's dream was quite a surprise.
I wonder if Anna has held their blood ritual at the Burrow and Charlie accidentally went through the blood circle.

Author's Response: Thank you! Intriguing idea about Charlie!!!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.09.20 - 09:11AM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow

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Interesting developments in this story.
Charlie's dream was an interesting point, also.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.09.18 - 02:50PM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow

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Wow! That was unexpected. Charlie having a wet dream! I guess the dragons haven't affected his libido! Really enjoying how you work Anna and Neville into canon events! Can't wait for the Cup! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D


Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I'm very glad that you are enjoying the story. The World Cup will be coming up soon!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.09.17 - 04:21PM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow

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Well I wasn't expecting that!
Looking forward to seeing how events at the Quidditch world cup turn out :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much the review! The Quidditch world cup will be coming up very soon.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.09.17 - 01:17PM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow

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That certainly took an unexpected turn. I am interested to see what significance this dream could have with regards to, perhaps, Anna's 'Darkness Within'. I think I felt a bit of the same sting as Charlie after enjoying the dream prose, and then retroactively inserting the two characters after his conversation with Bill. I've been enjoying your story, I will make a better effort to review more on it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! I'm glad you enjoying the story.




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