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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.11.15 - 06:59AM Title: Chapter 22 The Maze
It's been a brilliant description of the events in the maze. Cedric's part was quite the surprise. I loved it.
I guess that the help for Harry will be too late, and, once again, he needs to help himself.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the part about the maze. I felt the need to make some changes!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.11.07 - 02:10AM Title: Chapter 22 The Maze
Wonderful chapter! I especially liked reading about the Triwizard Tournament from Cedric's point of view. He indeed encountered more traps and snares and creatures than Harry did, but what I'm happiest about is that he was able to escape the graveyard alive, even if he did Splinch himself in the process. I sincerely hope Professor Flitwick arrives in time to get him to the hospital and learn what's going on with Harry.
I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Professor Dumbledore puts two and two together to realize that the absence of Harry and Cedric in the maze means more than just a spot of trouble and that his lack of response time, because he had to delegate the task of investigating Madam Rosmerta's note, doesn't make the difference between life and death for poor Cedric... and Harry as well.
Glad to know Bill enjoyed coming back to Hogwarts, too. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading Cedric's point of view. I always felt that Cedric would have tried to do something (cast a spell, apparate, etc) in the graveyard, if he actually had a bit of warning. The movie made it all seem to happen too fast for him to react, but in the book, he seemed to have more time and was more wary. While Cedric may not yet have an apparition license, as a Hogwarts student, he would have likely at least had apparition lessons. I greatly appreciate your review!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.11.06 - 03:16PM Title: Chapter 22 The Maze
Really like how you're doing the 3rd task! Nice spine tingling cliffy at the end there too! Nice twist having Cedric get away instead of dead! The splinch doesn't sound good tho! Sounds like Anna's grandpa is still coming back to body form - wonder if she has any clue?! I also enjoyed having Bill notice Fleur at the family gathering! I believe it was the other way around in the book! We didn't even see Bill in the GOF movie, and then that was followed by Bill and Harry supposedly not knowing each other in the DH1 movie! Neither of which was a surprise considering how Steve Kloves made a mess of so many things in the last 5 movies! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I guess I did leave a bit of a cliffy, but the next chapter will be posted soon. Your comment on splinching was spot on; it is not good at all. Glad you noticed Bill noticing Fleur! I definitely agree with you about the movies. It is a shame how many scenes were completely left out of the films, particularly since it leaves a confused vision of all of the relationships between the supporting characters and the main characters.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.11.06 - 01:13PM Title: Chapter 22 The Maze
Ooh, I didn't expect that to happen! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it was unexpected!
