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Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2016.11.18 - 11:44PM Title: The Web Unravels

So, it comes out. Another good chapter.

Author's Response: The secret is out, but the damage has still been done...secrets can cut quite deeply. Thanks for your review!



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2016.11.15 - 09:12PM Title: The Web Unravels

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I'm glad George leveled with the family. Fred is being a stubborn idiot, but hopefully he'll get over that. I like the way you've written the family interactions - the little things like George being unsure about Fleur.

Author's Response: I think we've all been a stubborn idiot at some point in our lives. :) I think that's the most interesting thing about family - there's always a million little interactions going on. Thanks for that!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.10.26 - 08:47AM Title: The Web Unravels

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Very good story.
Good luck for the challenge.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've really enjoyed writing for it - and reading the other submissions! I think it's been a really successful challenge.



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.10.23 - 01:25PM Title: The Web Unravels

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I have long waffled between a bit of a pique over how JKR pushed aside so many well-developed secondary characters during DH, and an abiding curiosity over just what was going on in the minds of these secondary characters during such a stressful, uncertain time.

I greatly appreciate what you're doing here to open some doors, to shed some light, not just on Ginny, but also on other people who were greatly affected by the golden trio's disappearance. The twins in particular.

As the series progressed, you could tell that Rowling was making a gradual, but ever-greater, effort to differentiate between George and Fred. Perhaps she knew after the first couple books that one of the two would eventually have to die; that the 'matched set' must be broken; that one must have meaning without the other. I believe what you're doing here, however sadly it must end, does the great service of showing us two distinct and compelling individuals.

Author's Response: I think this is perhaps why we so enjoy writing fanfiction - we have so many interesting characters who didn't get to tell their full story. If JKR had done it all, DH might have been several books! I find it deeply interesting to consider what she decided about characters and when she decided it, but either way I'm glad she began to make the twins different people. They always are different people, as similar as they might seem. My hope is that I've also illustrated the strength of the sibling bonds outside of the twins' relationship; the Weasley family is something quite special.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.10.22 - 07:21PM Title: The Web Unravels

Well fred is right to be pissed but he should be pissed at himself more then George....kutgw

Author's Response: They both screwed up pretty royally in this chapter...I'm not sure it's worth it to keep score. But it always takes two to tango!



Reviewer: JuttaV Signed Date: 2016.10.20 - 04:15PM Title: The Web Unravels

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This seems very promising! It doesn't seem very unlikely to me that even the twins could get into fights and the way you've written it really appeals to me. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I feel like if you spend enough time with ANYONE you end up devolving into some bickering, and I'm sure Fred and George have had their share. I hope you like what comes next!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.10.16 - 09:14PM Title: The Web Unravels

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Interesting chapter! It must be so hard for twins who are so close to be arguing the way they are. Hopefully, Fred and George will really make up soon. I can't help but wonder if Ginny's secret will come out, or if that has been protected. Percy is still a bit of a prat in my opinion. Oh well!

Author's Response: I'm sort of glad you think Percy is still being an idiot - that's kind of what I meant for him in this chapter. He'll get there, but he'll always be Percy. Ginny's secret will play a bit of a role in the next chapter, but only a small one. This story always was about George and Fred.



Reviewer: gustovcarl Signed Date: 2016.10.16 - 04:27PM Title: The Web Unravels

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An excellent chapter to a story that started as pretty damned good!!
I will be interested in seeing where this is going.

Author's Response: Thanks! The last chapter is in the works at the moment, so you'll get to see how everything wraps up when that goes up.




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