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Reviews For A Marked Man

Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.12.21 - 08:20AM Title: Chapter 1

Ginny is really Harry's equal.....wonderful story



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.10.18 - 10:09PM Title: Chapter 1

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Nice little insight into Harry's mind. Together, they will be able to achieve anything.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.10.08 - 05:29PM Title: Chapter 1

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This is a nice little look into Harry's psyche and what shaped him and Ginny into the people they have become. It's good that they're willing to help each other and there is definitely promise that their relationship will grow and blossom.

I enjoyed this story very much and hope to see more of your work posted here at SIYE soon. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks for the very kind words. I'm glad you liked the story. We'll I'll have the other one-shots out soon. Thanks for reviewing! It's very flattering for you, an amazing author, to come and review one of my stories!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.10.08 - 07:29AM Title: Chapter 1

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Nice short story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. Stick around, the next one-shot is in the queue, so it should hopefully be out soon! Cheers



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.10.07 - 06:42PM Title: Chapter 1

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Generally well written, but it did not seem very interesting to me. Does Harry not know what honeymoons are for? Wrong sort of mood.

Author's Response: I'm sorry it wasn't to your liking. We still have (at least) three more, so maybe they'll have the right mood for you. I think they're funnier and have a lot more character. I just had a piece that was more contemplative and this one seemed like the best place. Thank you for your review! You took the time to read and review, and for that, many thanks!



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.10.07 - 05:39PM Title: Chapter 1

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Sweet! Nice to have you writing on here!

A couple minor glitches: your "had had" should only be a single "had", right? And the first of your two "effect" instances is really "affect".

I'll be interested in seeing your other one-shots as they come together!

Author's Response: Thank you for the stars and a lovely review. I think the "effect" used to be "affect", and I changed it last minute. That's what I get for doubting word choices! I'm glad you liked it. My favorites are still coming, so keep an eye open for them, and hopefully they'll get better as they come along! Cheers.




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