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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.02.12 - 11:03PM Title: The Patronus Revisited

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An enjoyable chapter.
So, his feelings have produced a semi-solid patronus?
I wonder if he is going to act on his feelings and get together with Ginny earlier than canon!


Author's Response: Hey Carolyn, the way the story seems to be progressing on my laptop, it might just happen way earlier than it did in canon. How early...now that's for me to know and for you to read later :P Thank you so much for your review, please do look at Chapter 6! :)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2017.02.07 - 04:36PM Title: The Patronus Revisited

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Brilliant chapter, I particularly enjoyed Harry's patronus and his feelings for Ginny being what brought it about. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much ginnyweasley777! :D Please do have a look at Chapter 6! :)



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.02.07 - 02:10AM Title: The Patronus Revisited

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Lovely chapter! Great ending with Neville helping Harry get ready for the second task of the triwizard tournament. So, a semi-solid patronus... I don't think I've ever read about that previously. Wonderful, the impact of Ginny on Harry!

Author's Response: Hi there, thanks for coming back to read this chapter! I will freely admit, the idea of improving the Patronus Charm isn't new, but the logic and the result might be unique :P Please do have a look at Chapter 6!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.04 - 11:13PM Title: The Patronus Revisited

Harry and crew need to think outside the box and ask for help from other friends then themseves.....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews so far :) Please do have a look of Chapter 6! :)



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.02.04 - 07:40PM Title: The Patronus Revisited

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Just like the students I'm quite curious about the reasons the students are supposed to learn such advanced magic in their fourth year. Not that I'm complaining. I'm glad that Harry used this opportunity to recognize the reason for his happy feelings. I just hope that he'll do something about it asap. After all, he isn't the only boy at Hogwarts, and red heads are selling like hot cakes, lol.

Many thanks for this longingly awaited new instalment. I loved it!

Author's Response: It's an odd choice, no doubt, but if Dumbledore chose to show the Unforgiveable Curses to the fourth-years, I'm sure the Patronus Charm isn't too much of a reach. And, seriously? Red heads selling like hot cakes? :P



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.02.04 - 03:29PM Title: The Patronus Revisited

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I got quite excited at Harry's new theory on producing a Patronus.

Author's Response: Thank you! Please do have a look at Chapter 6!




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