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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.04.02 - 12:13AM Title: Unwelcome Realizations

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Being that they are at Hogwarts and not the Ministry of Magic, Amelia Bones, hopefully, is not arresting Sirius.
Loved Neville's lesson on house elves magic. He will make a great professor.
Harry needs to hurry up with Ginny or he may 'miss the boat'. Michael Corner or Dean may beat him to the punch!!
Loved this chapter and looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Shrewd observational and deduction skills you possess, Carolyn :P Look out for Chapter 9 - you'll get your answers :)



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.03.30 - 09:13PM Title: Unwelcome Realizations

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The plot thickens! Loving this story. Looking forward to reading what will happen next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)



Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2017.03.28 - 02:56PM Title: Unwelcome Realizations

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Great chapter!
The social history of the house elves was quite interesting. Let's hope that Hermione got something out of Neville's lesson.

I just hope Harry will act soon. Michael is already waiting for her around the Corner.

Author's Response: Ah, you have read Chapter 8 :P Oh she does get a lot out of Neville's lecture - she's stubborn, but not too much to the point of being thick-headed. She's Hermione, c'mon!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.03.28 - 06:57AM Title: Unwelcome Realizations

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Hermione’s approach to help the house elves somehow is quite similar to desire in the so called western world to help the countries of so called third world. They really want to help but have no clue what really happens there.

Neville’s explanation about the elvish society have been very illuminating. Is Neville on the way to become one of the main characters of this story? I'd certainly won't mind.

Somehow I’ve got the feeling that Harry is avoiding Ginny after the second task. Git!

Nice cliffy, I suspect that Sirius is voluntarily in Dumbledore's office. I'm curious what you've planned for him.

Even if I have to wait a few more chapters, I'm already quite curious about the influence of the confessions of Bartemius Crouch on the third task. I'd be quite disappointed in both, Harry and Dumbledore, if Harry will touch a portkey cup at the end of the third task.

Author's Response: Yes! Exactly my point - helping other cultures and people without having any idea about them and their lifestyle is asking for trouble. Both for the helpers, and the people being helped. Neville is already one of the main characters - he's got that thing about him, doesn't he?




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