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Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2017.05.06 - 05:40AM Title: The Trial of Sirius Orion Black - Part I
Interesting premise, great story. I especially like it how you had Harry kiss Ginny under similar circumstances, but two years early.
As for your grammar and spelling, the story is very clean; a definite plus in my book.
Anxious to see more Harry x Ginny action,
Ranma-sensei
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.04.27 - 06:16AM Title: The Trial of Sirius Orion Black - Part I
Love the way you worked in Tonks at the end of this chapter and the reaction of Remus to her. Just had to leave us with a cliffhanger again I see. Harry and Ginny are very cute and sweet together. I'm glad Harry is realising that many families were negatively affected by Voldemort, not just his. Your Harry is a bit more insightful which is quite refreshing. Looking forward to the trial!
Reviewer: demonesprit Signed Date: 2017.04.26 - 01:49PM Title: The Trial of Sirius Orion Black - Part I
Oh, that's just not fair!!! A cliffhanger like that should not be allowed. :)
Really looking forward to the next chapter. I have as many forebodings as Harry does!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.04.26 - 06:07AM Title: The Trial of Sirius Orion Black - Part I
Well harry needs to think that maybe just maybe that he shiould think about which way he should go...as for him kissing ginny and not getting killed that is a fate worthly of disney....for harry to pull the big brother card on ron was a nice touch as well....going to lawyers sucks I cant imagin going to one at 14. Now the trial....kutgw
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.04.26 - 03:12AM Title: The Trial of Sirius Orion Black - Part I
Great Update! I loved it.
I'm glad that Ginny and Harry are getting along so well. I'm looking forward to reading about their first heart to heart talk, e.g. how it came that Ginny was Harry's bait in the Second Task. Or did they already had the conversation, and you withheld it? (Okay, let’s count their talk in chapter 3 as the first one, it would be the second)
Has JKR ever told us whether Harry has asked Ron for his sister's hand, or Arthur for his daughter's hand? Sometimes I'm afraid it was the former, lol.
There are so many unknowns in this trial. Has Malfoy bribed anyone yet? Are the Greengrasses already bound to Lucius Malfoy by the betrothal contract between their kids? How’ll this affect the hearing? Dumbledore is Harry's regent in Wizengamot. Is it in Dumbledore's interest that Sirius is a free man? I suppose that we'll see...
I'm curious what shocked Harry so much. Maybe Dementors are guarding the courtroom?
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.04.26 - 02:32AM Title: The Trial of Sirius Orion Black - Part I
It seems you really like to end your chapters with a cliffee type question!!
Another good chapter.
Looking forward to the next one.
