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Reviewer: HGMoony Signed Date: 2020.06.07 - 03:14PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2016.11.20 - 12:26AM Title: Chapter 3

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Great story! Poor Harry is so cute when he has to admit to Mr.Weasley that he flew into the tree bacause he was looking at Ginny to make sure she was watching him. I bet the twins were really working over-time to stop from laughing at the fact that Harry admitted to showing off for Ginny. It had to be very obvious to Mr. and Mrs. Weasley after Harry's admittance that he is crushing or on their daughter.
I can't wait for your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I think it's very obvious to Mr. and Mrs. Weasley as well as the twins, but I don't think Harry truly accepts his feelings yet. Harry doesn't take a lot of time to reflect on why he does things, and I think this chapter (plus the subsequent chapters with the game) force him to really think about his motivations and evaluate his feelings.



Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2016.11.16 - 12:33AM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2016.11.15 - 09:48PM Title: Chapter 3

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I like the thought, but Ginny's magic wouldn't pick up as they are in a magical household. I can't imagine that just moving right beyond the wards would make a difference.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! That is a fair point. It's an AU story, so I figured I could push the limits a bit. Perhaps the Ministry may be stricter about underage magic since it is a time of war? I suppose it wouldn't have made a difference in the story if I'd just written that part out. But I like the idea of adding a bit more stress to the situation ;)



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.11.15 - 08:02PM Title: Chapter 3

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Excellent chapter, and you managed to answer a few questions I had been wondering about the incident by the lake. Molly and Arthur handled the situation quite well considering the circumstances. I have a feeling Harry and Ginny may have to deal with a bit of teasing from her brothers. Looking forward to your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I wanted to try writing a conflict in which Molly isn't furious and handing out punishments. Most of the characters rarely ask for help from adults, so I thought that Ginny's willingness to be vulnerable and trust her mother might elicit a different reaction.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.11.15 - 10:14AM Title: Chapter 3

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Aww, such a sweet end to the chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Didn't want to leave you with a third cliffhanger :)



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.11.15 - 09:11AM Title: Chapter 3

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Oh yes, just like I'd feared, it's a summoning for a hearing. Since the two of them already had their hearing in the Burrow, it's a relieve that the hearing in the Ministry isn't necessary anymore. I wonder, however, when the two of them will stop talking in circles, lol.
Oh, and I'm curious when the promised slugs will make their appearance. ;-)

Many thanks for another brilliant chapter. When I've read that this is a sequel to "The Not-So-Lucky Potion" I thought that it'd be a one-shot, too. I'm really glad that you're giving us a bit more of the good stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you! This started out as a one-shot/missing moment and morphed into a multi-chapter story because Harry fell in the lake and there was nothing I could do to stop him ;) The slugs are coming in the next chapter!




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