Reviews For New Quidditch Event
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.11.14 - 12:15PM Title: Chapter 1
When I first saw this story a few day ago, it was Chapter 2 that was posted. Today I saw an update and I went to read it and started realizing I had already seen this. So I went back and read chapter one, which I hadn't seen yet. Just thought I would share. Well done.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.11.14 - 08:41AM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.11.13 - 06:22AM Title: Chapter 2 Lifetime Career
Rita is going to wish she just left harry alone shorty i tihnk...as for where you are going, not bad, but a little jumpy but thats ok...kutgw
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.11.13 - 06:07AM Title: Chapter 1
Well it is different but nice start cant wait to see where you go from here...kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.11.12 - 05:35PM Title: Chapter 2 Lifetime Career
As a story, it rushes through the time line from the first chapter to this, but that is all right. Either the end of this chapter was rushed or the wrong draft got posted because it is full of grammar mistakes. Also a motorbike has a twist grip on the handlebars for the throttle - not a foot pedal. Still a good effort.