Reviews For Greater Beings
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 10:05AM Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts
It's been a quite intriguing Sorting Ceremony. I'm curious which Head of House will hand over their schedules, and what school robes the two of them will wear. Molly was surprisingly calm about the Bond, lol.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 09:17AM Title: Chapter 2: Almost Ten Years Later
I like your approach. However, since the story is AU (I love AU stories) a few more explanations would've been nice. Why is Sirius not in Azkaban? Why did he never visit Harry? Apparently, he knows how Harry grew up. He yells at Dumbledore without even asking Harry about his childhood.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 08:41AM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
That's a quite intriguing introduction into the story. I really like your approach and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 04:55AM Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts
This started really interesting, but you seem to be going faster and faster as if you want to get it finished.
Reviewer: dronvire Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 12:12AM Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts
Your basic story idea seems alright so far but you're rushing it. Don't forget to tell about why Sirius was not in Azkaban and how Harry knows Tonks' aura when he hasn't met her yet.