Reviews For Hiding in Plain Sight
Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2017.09.24 - 05:28PM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.12 - 10:29PM Title: Chapter 11 - Restituo Amare
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.12 - 10:15PM Title: Chapter 10 - Vainglorious
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.12 - 09:50PM Title: Chapter 9 - It Sort of Wore Out
Awww, the picture book is totally something little Ginny would do! It's adorable... but also something I can see her being embarrassed about as an adult.
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2017.09.11 - 08:26PM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
You just HAD to stop there didn't you
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 05:16PM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Recruiting
I loved Harry and Ginny recruiting for Dumbledore's Army in Germany! And those poor kids, barely knowing any magic and wanting Harry and Ginny to show what 'a real wizard's duel' was like. I want to hug those poor children! And they only have one wand between all of them. :( I have a niece and nephew, so that bit really broke my heart.
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 04:12PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Ghetto
I love the two new German wizards!!
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 10:15AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pretty Woman
Your story is really good so far! You have a great understanding of Ginny and her background as "country girl" not caring about all the clothes. I'm also glad you're showing class differences between Harry and Ginny. I grew up in a middle class home, and my aunt is upper-middle, and I just... You notice when someone has more money than you; when money is no big deal to them.
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 05:59AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pretty Woman
Hi... Thought I would point this little error out to you... those things." Gummy murmured, her gaze never leaving the scenes of London that were passing by. "You're sure they're safe?" You called Ginny gummy
Reviewer: archgirl Signed Date: 2017.09.09 - 12:17PM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Just found your story and I love it. I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.09.04 - 10:04AM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2017.08.30 - 01:26AM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Wow! The entire ceiling of the Sistine Chapel, or perhaps, specifically, the finger of God? Great stuff in this chapter! Honeymoon dreams, as well. Our boy is catching on!
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2017.08.29 - 03:55PM Title: Chapter 18 - That Ginny, This Ginny
Oh, no! Hurt in the Muggle World! Nice chapter, but I hate to see Ginny injured in their panic!
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2017.08.29 - 07:17AM Title: Chapter 17 - Miracles and Magic
Another outstanding chapter! I've never dealt with the disposal of a Horcrux in my own writing, so I can understand your thought process completely. I guess they could have carried the Sorting Hat with them in order to be able to summon the Sword of Gryffindor, but I understand the unwillingness to rely on this prop! Since you used the spell to draw Voldemort's soul fragment into a flammable object, I didn't doubt your logic during first reading. However, when you explained it, I had a different reaction. Interesting! If I stop and think about Kreacher's tireless efforts to destroy the Locket Horcrux, regular fire starts to seem implausible as an agent capable of destroying such a powerful object. I'll just rely upon the fact that the reversal spell, Restituo Amare, was adequate to remove the protections Voldemort had placed upon the Shroud of Turin. By assuming that the protections would have been placed on the object, rather than the soul fragment, itself, I find no problem accepting that regular everyday fire could be enough to do the trick! Outstanding!
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2017.08.29 - 07:03AM Title: Chapter 16 - She's My Little Angel
Nice touches throughout this chapter! As a former Episcopal priest, now Catholic layman, I feel qualified to commend you for the excellent job you did with Harry and Ginny's lack of familiarity with even the most basic of ecclesiastical terminology ... Hogwarts Parish, OH MY! Hilarious, yet extremely uncomfortable! Just like the entire confrontation with the Archbishop.
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2017.08.29 - 06:56AM Title: Chapter 15 - Something You'll Like
Lovely way to move the story along while building the suspense! Likewise, what a nice job of showing Harry struggling to resist the irresistible force that is Ginny Weasley! Very nicely done.
Reviewer: j3w3lsimone Signed Date: 2017.08.15 - 09:41PM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Oh my gosh this is a amazing story! I can't wait to see where it goes.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.08.04 - 06:55AM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Wonderful to see another chapter of this story! You may want to check the spacing between lines of text. Anyway, I can't imagine how Harry and Ginny will manage this Horcrux!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.08.04 - 05:58AM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Now who would do such a nasty thing to Ginny and harry while harry was on the ground in pain...the painting or their new best friend....kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.08.03 - 05:24PM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Worth the wait.