Reviews For Hiding in Plain Sight
Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2017.12.02 - 03:55PM Title: Chapter 21 - Stop Being Noble
Well, another one bites the dust! I'm really loving this version of the Horcruxes and destroying them.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2017.11.30 - 07:54PM Title: Chapter 21 - Stop Being Noble
Narrow escape, and now off to the Mona Lisa. At least that one wasn't too hard to destroy, although I'm uneasy about that. It was so big, and Harry still seemed in pain, so I'm not certain its finished. Am I right?
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2017.11.30 - 07:43PM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Yipes! Talk about a cliffy! And poor Harry is down for the count. I wonder who followed them? A flying blade of light sounds like a spell, unless its a Muggle laser. So glad there's more to find out!!
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2017.11.30 - 12:17PM Title: Chapter 18 - That Ginny, This Ginny
The potential Howler to Ron was inspired and hilarious. Oh, I'd love to read a scene with something like that actually happening, lol.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2017.11.29 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 17 - Miracles and Magic
Exciting chapter! And one Horcrux down! Harry is still greatly affected by them, so I'm assuming there is still the problem of there being one in him. With your ability to transfer them, however, I'm not as anxious as I was in canon, lol. Eager to see what the next important artifact will be. I hope they can reseal it without any damage and make the Archbiship happy. Nicely done.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2017.11.29 - 09:41AM Title: Chapter 12 - Lockhart with Skills
Uhm...I think the wizarding world is well-acquainted with Jesus. They celebrate Christmas in every book and sing the caroles.Hogwarts also has Easter hols. Other than that, I loved Harry and Ginny imitating Ron and Hermione. Very teenage-like behavior, and I really appreciate the reminder that they're really still kids.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2017.11.29 - 09:02AM Title: Chapter 10 - Vainglorious
How interesting. Grindelwald has put Harry in much the same position that Dumbledore put Snape. I'm glad Harry stood his ground, however. I think murdering in cold blood, no matter how merciful, would take a piece of who Harry is. The one part that didn't sit right with me was the line about Harry being unable to finish this without Ginny. He did finish it without her - we saw that in canon - so that line really didn't work for me.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2017.11.28 - 06:43PM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Recruiting
Another great update! I'm so happy you didn't have Ginny easily best Harry in their duel. He's the one who has to defeat Voldemort, so I thought it was much more realistic this way. Loved that he used a Tickling Jinx as his spell. Too cute! I'm eager for the meeting with Grindelwald and really wonder what he'll be like. Nicely done!
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2017.11.28 - 05:25PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Ghetto
Its been quite a while since I read anything, never mind anything I've enjoyed as much. This is such a clever, alternate view of how DH could've gone. While I grew to love DH, I remember missing Ginny very much when I read it. Now, reading this one, I miss Ron and Hermione. Go figure! I want to congratulate you on how well your story flows, following the canon timeline and yet being completely different. I'm thoroughly enjoying it, and I particularly love how supportive Ginny is to Harry's losses. He's been through a lot, and I always liked that part of Ginny that acted as "his best source of comfort." Well done!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.11.28 - 02:32PM Title: Chapter 21 - Stop Being Noble
Plenty action for Harry and Ginny. Look forward to more.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.28 - 06:22AM Title: Chapter 21 - Stop Being Noble
Ah they are one closer, and an easy choice Togo to for the next one....kutgw
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.11.28 - 04:39AM Title: Chapter 21 - Stop Being Noble
Thanks for another fine update.
Reviewer: Sbz93 Signed Date: 2017.11.11 - 05:01PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Underground
Great story so far! Can't wait for the next update... Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2017.09.24 - 05:28PM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.12 - 10:29PM Title: Chapter 11 - Restituo Amare
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.12 - 10:15PM Title: Chapter 10 - Vainglorious
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.12 - 09:50PM Title: Chapter 9 - It Sort of Wore Out
Awww, the picture book is totally something little Ginny would do! It's adorable... but also something I can see her being embarrassed about as an adult.
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2017.09.11 - 08:26PM Title: Chapter 20 - Haunting
You just HAD to stop there didn't you
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 05:16PM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Recruiting
I loved Harry and Ginny recruiting for Dumbledore's Army in Germany! And those poor kids, barely knowing any magic and wanting Harry and Ginny to show what 'a real wizard's duel' was like. I want to hug those poor children! And they only have one wand between all of them. :( I have a niece and nephew, so that bit really broke my heart.
Reviewer: theybecameanimagi Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 04:12PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Ghetto
I love the two new German wizards!!