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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.01.14 - 12:15PM Title: Chapter 4 Cousins
Oh, Malfoy as matchmaker without even noticing it, lol. He cannot imagine that someone wouldn't follow his instructions.
Although Harry promised to protect Ginny, it seems that Ginny is soon on her own protecting her kids and herself since Harry will soon leave England again. It doesn't sound good.
It was a great chapter, almost fluffy considering the background of the story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to show some progression of their relationship.
Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2017.01.12 - 01:20PM Title: Chapter 4 Cousins
Great chapter. I know Draco will be punished but I really hope he ends up dead. So that Ginny and her children will have nothing to worry. Looking forward to see what stories Harry will tell to Luna.
Author's Response: Thanks! We don't actually see their interview, but I hope you will still like it.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.01.12 - 12:31PM Title: Chapter 4 Cousins
“It would be nice to introduce them to my godson, Teddy,” Sirius said. “After all, they are second cousins. It would be nice for them to meet.”
- That is from the last chapter. Is Teddy not Harry's godson? Teddy is related to Sirius.
All coming along nicely.
Author's Response: Oops, you are right. He is Harry's godson and related to Sirius. I will fix it.
Thanks!
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2017.01.12 - 12:05PM Title: Chapter 4 Cousins
another interesting chapter. Thanks. I am amused by Ginny's reflexive proprietary attitude towards Harry. I am enjoying this story very much--I only hope that when/if Draco and Ginny separate that Draco gets what he deserves.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Ginny is very interested. Don't worry, Draco will get what he deserves.
Reviewer: Lokken Signed Date: 2017.01.12 - 03:27AM Title: Chapter 4 Cousins
As I sais no FF.net - Too bad Harry can't just challenge Draco to duel and rid everyone of abusive bastard.
I also wonder how some of Weasley family members are sleeping at night with knowledge of fate Ginny has to suffer every day. Out of sight, out of mind, perhaps?
Is it possible to love this story and dislike some it at the same time? I guess it is.
Author's Response: I think you are right its a combination of out of sight out of mind and denial. Draco will get his, don't worry.
