Reviews For The Price of Victory
Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2018.06.30 - 05:50PM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy I came back and read the whole story, I was surprised to see the Black family tree mention. Main reason I came back that it was on this site, Harry and Ginny was suppose end up together.. I read an few story's that Ginny married or dating someone else, and she has kids with that person. By time the story end that Ginny and her kids are with Harry, never mention if Harry has kids with Ginny so I presume no. Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2017.01.20 - 10:19AM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy So no one lynched you in the end :) for which I'm pleased for several reasons including that fact that you will be back with another story sometime soon. Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2017.01.17 - 11:35AM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy Sorry I have not left any reviews before this chapter. I'm a big fan of your writing and I think I've read every story you have written, many of them more than once. I know you've tackled some sensitive subject matter before but this is your first story that I almost didn't read, based on the subject matter. After a while I became curious, and read a few of the reviews, then read bits of a couple chapters but in the end I gave in and read the whole thing from the beginning. It was hard reading about Ginny's experiences but your writing was still excellent and the storyline exciting. In the end I think you brought it to a successful and satisfying conclusion (although I rather think Draco got off too easy!). Even so, the end of the house of Malfoy was a welcome event. I would have loved to see another chapter or two devoted to Harry and Ginny's developing relationship but even so I was glad to see them together in the end. Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2017.01.17 - 01:27AM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy Very good ending. Every got what they deserve except Ginny's parents but I think that's understandable. It's so good Perseus helped them to take everything back from Narcissa. I loved that Harry asked the children what they think about his marriage proposal to their mother. I wish there!s an epilogue showing they're married and living happily with their children too. Looking forward to your new stories. Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2017.01.17 - 12:22AM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy Awwww... What a lovely end! I'm glad Draco and co.. got what they had coming to them. Thank you for writing a thrilling story! Harry proposing in front of his new family is adorable! Definitely something different, but I love it all the same. Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2017.01.17 - 12:22AM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy Awwww... What a lovely end! I'm glad Draco and co.. got what they had coming to them. Thank you for writing a thrilling story! Harry proposing in front of his new family is adorable! Definitely something different, but I love it all the same. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.01.16 - 12:27PM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy Just wanted to say to those who were disappointed that Ginny didn't punish her parents for their actions, I think you made it clear why when you mentioned she wanted her kids to have one set of grandparents in their lives. I don't think Ginny will have any issues being married to Harry because she'll be with a man she truly loves and who truly loves her. Your last line said it all! Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.01.16 - 12:14PM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy BRAVO BRAVO! HOLD FOR LOUD APPLAUSE!!! Glad to see all the baddies ended up getting justice for their actions -- including Madame Bones! Really did my heart good to see the Malfoy line come to an end and Narcissa end up with nothing but air! Hated to see the twins get into trouble but they deserved it! Overjoyed to see the future Potter family and glad the kids are so tickled by it! Thanks for the happy ending! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: Lokken Signed Date: 2017.01.16 - 10:42AM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy Long-ish review on FF.net. Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2017.01.16 - 09:16AM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy Thanks for a fun story. Good to see Draco and his family get what they deserve. Ginny realizing that she was making decisions based on what Draco had wanted was poignant. I suspect that Ginny is going to have trouble with many aspects of marriage with Harry after what she went through but I'm fine with not reading that bit. Thanks for your hard work. Reviewer: HeroInTheWings731 Signed Date: 2017.01.16 - 12:10AM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy I ended up really loving this story, but the ending here was rather abrupt for me. After the two chaste kisses in the the cave and hospital, I didn't think Harry and Ginny had actually become a couple. I loved the first half of this chapter where they continued to bond and Ginny and the kids settled into household. But I thought it was just part of Harry and Ginny's growing attraction, which would have the chapter end with them getting together as a couple; the proposal seemed to be jumping the gun from what I expected. Then, I thought there may be a chapter or two of Ginny adjusting to a normal relationship, as well as fallout from the events of the story, before the story ended with a proposal or marriage in 2 or 3 chapters. Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.01.15 - 06:24PM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy "“Where to you need to go?” Ginny asked Harry." - Been at the sherry then? The end was not unexpected, but it felt good. Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.01.15 - 04:04PM Title: Chapter 8 Destruction of the House of Malfoy The story leaves me with a laughing and a sad eye. | |||||||
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