Reviews For A Proper Epilogue
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.08.09 - 08:39AM Title: Chapter 16 - Some Stupid, Noble Reason
A perfect stroke of the pen to have Harry finally drive home the truth that is love... Through much of this story you write our protagonists as the struggling teens that they, rather than the idealised icons we might wish them to be. Reality is more difficult to read than ideality, however the reward that comes with the epiphanous apparation of true sincerity makes it worth it. One tiny quibble with Kingsley saying, "I know it seems like a lot to ask...". I believe a straight shooter of his character would say, "I know it *is* a lot to ask..." Author's Response: I'm sort of speechless after this review! Thank you so much. This is perhaps the most meaningful review I have ever received, especially coming from someone whose writing I respect so thoroughly. Thank you so much! And, good catch on Kingsley's statement. I agree. That would have been a better decision. Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.02.21 - 08:05AM Title: Chapter 16 - Some Stupid, Noble Reason The scene between Ginny and Molly was wonderful as well as the scene at the very end. However, it was overshadowed by something else. I'm quite peeved that Kingsley took advantage of the situation and summoned Harry from Ginny’s bedside to trick him to join the Aurors. Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2017.02.21 - 01:42AM Title: Chapter 16 - Some Stupid, Noble Reason Such a happy ending to this chapter, but what a sad road to it... Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2017.02.20 - 08:19PM Title: Chapter 16 - Some Stupid, Noble Reason An excellent, emotional chapter. Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2017.02.20 - 05:50AM Title: Chapter 16 - Some Stupid, Noble Reason No Review Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.02.20 - 05:02AM Title: Chapter 16 - Some Stupid, Noble Reason What a rollercoaster of emotions. Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.02.20 - 01:55AM Title: Chapter 16 - Some Stupid, Noble Reason Such a sad chapter! The conversation between Molly and Ginny was wonderful, as was Harry's reassurance that Ginny is what he wants and what he needs. Pansy's mother was horrible. What a despicable woman! Once again you managed to make me feel truly sorry for Pansy. Well done! Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.20 - 12:01AM Title: Chapter 16 - Some Stupid, Noble Reason Now it's harder on both of them but easier for both of them to see what the other has gone through over the last year and a half. I'm glad to see that Jenny and Molly had a very good heart to heart talk, and opened up a new chapter for both to move forward. Harry has learned some lessons, he's learning not to jump in with both feet and that is a very good thing. I still hope they make it through with the loss of their child, but they will make it in the end I think. Kutgw | |||||||
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