Reviews For A Proper Epilogue
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.09.24 - 07:14AM Title: Chapter 18 - Embracing Realities
Interesting back story to Florian Fortescue! I did a bit of scouting to see what canonical explanation for the oddly detailed yet negligent way he was handled in the books and discovered that he was indeed being groomed for a key role in DH, but the plot wandered elsewhere. Your rehabilitation of his story is more satisfying. I very much enjoyed key aspects of the Harry/Ginny 'equilibration' in this chapter. It is in segments like these that you are delivering on your 'proper epilogue' mandate. Good job! I have a few nits and a couple of pickies that I will share in a PM. If they don't appear shortly, then blame the messenger :) Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.02.24 - 12:10AM Title: Chapter 18 - Embracing Realities Wow! The fact that you are once again making me feel truly sorry for Pansy is amazing. Wonderful chapter! Looking forward to reading what will happen next. Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 01:18PM Title: Chapter 18 - Embracing Realities So much love for the Molly and Arthur trying to finally draw a line to protect Harry from being used again. At least someone sees it. Minerva used to try to be the voice of reason to protect Harry, but maybe being Headmistress allows her to see some things that the others can't. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 01:46AM Title: Chapter 18 - Embracing Realities Boy did Cissy step in it now......and soon everyone will know and pansy will just want to hide in a deep hole...as for ginny and harry they are about to show what cissy would see in the fututre but may need to think more tackfully.....kutgw Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.02.22 - 11:34PM Title: Chapter 18 - Embracing Realities Follow up on prior review! I had to say I agree with you about the movies! While they were good and I own them all as well as the books, I believe the biggest problem with the movies was the script writing of Steve Kloves! It was especially lacking or poor in HBP and DH2! In HBP, the attack on the burrow at Christmas was a total fabrication! He also ignored the fact that DH the book made it clear that Greyback wasn't allowed to carry a wand! Worse, the first snog scene between Harry and Ginny was a disgrace! It was in the wrong place and way too timid! We saw more passion and a longer snog between Harry and Cho in OOTP! In DH2, Kloves completely ignored the importance of "a power he knows not"! Had he shown Harry thinking about his kiss with Ginny at the burrow in part 1 right before Riddle hit him with the killing curse in the forest, it would have made it quite clear what that "power" was! Then he completely fabricated how the final battle ended! Good thing JKR allowed fanfic writers alot of latitude in stories like this! Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.02.22 - 08:34PM Title: Chapter 18 - Embracing Realities I would have thought that if Malcolm Parkinson is the number one Wizard to be caught, then his wife would have been under observation. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.02.22 - 05:20PM Title: Chapter 18 - Embracing Realities The plot thickeneth! Can't help but wonder if Mrs. Parkinson was involved in the attack! Odd to see Pansy reduced to waiting tables but alittle humility never hurts! I think you have an interesting angle on the elderwand so I look forward to seeing where you go with this! JKR did leave the elderwand's fate unknown at the end of DH so that is open to writer's discretion! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.02.22 - 03:08PM Title: Chapter 18 - Embracing Realities Whoa! This is what I call real drama. How marvellous. Thank you for a very very quick update. You made my day! | |||||||
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