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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.03.31 - 06:46AM Title: Chapter 2

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This really isn't much of a story, more like random events that don't seem to connect to much.

Author's Response: Hello, there! Thank you for reading and dropping your feedback. yeah, it's rather be a song-fic. Please just enjoy it. I'll be back to this site after my RL let me free. To write more, I mean. :D



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.03.28 - 06:52AM Title: Chapter 5

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Im glad that the two of them are finally together. However, I have to admit, that I was a wee bit surprised. I wouldn't have expected that Ginny would kiss Harry, although she's still dating Dean.


Author's Response: Hi. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a review. Harry made the action, he couldn't resist even he knew Ginny was Dean's girlfriend atm and she responded to him 'cause it was Harry she truly loved. :)



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.03.28 - 06:47AM Title: Chapter 4

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I'm glad that Ginny enjoys herself. Seems that Dean would be the far better choice for her. The two of them seem to be the perfect match with similar interests.

Author's Response: Oh, I didn't notice this review. I answered to your review at chapter 5 at first. Yeah, she seemed to find a new life with Dean. Your review here let me think of writing a story after chapter 5. :)



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.03.08 - 11:39AM Title: Chapter 5

You should consider to correct the category of this story if you want to participate in the "The Carpe Diem Challenge".

Author's Response: Thank you, Gin. I fixed it. :)



Reviewer: JJamieDupane Signed Date: 2017.03.05 - 10:04AM Title: Chapter 5

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It is a good write but it is too random and did not make much sense...

Author's Response: Thank you for stopping by and leaving a honest review. You're right. It's a fragmentary episode from Rowling's original story and added my imagination. If you prefer profound content, I'll post a longer novel. :D



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.03.04 - 08:33PM Title: Chapter 5

Well if they kiss does that mean that they are now going to get rid of deana nd make them a couple now.....kutgw

Author's Response: Yeah, for a moment, they did. In this site, though I made this story completed , I may continue this as a sequel if I get a good prompt here and there. :) Thank you for stopping by and leaving a review.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.03.03 - 08:09PM Title: Chapter 4

Ah harry your so screw with ginny its not even funny. As for dean well its nice to see there was a little spark but nothing to get flamed on.....kutgw

Author's Response: Thank you for encouragement. I'm writing chapter 5 based on Rowling's story and struggling with the process how they find each other. Maybe it will be written for this site's story challenge. :)



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.02.08 - 02:09AM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.02.04 - 05:13PM Title: Chapter 3

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Poor Ginny. In his fourth year, Harry played Quidditch and has gone swimming with her alone in the middle of the night. Oddly enough he paid less and less attention to her later on.

Author's Response: Hi, Gin! Yeah, I followed the rule, girls get mature faster than boys. For an example, there is a girl who found a piano set in a hotel lounge. She sat at the piano and then, she began to play emotionally while a boy enjoyed mixing all drinks in the lounge and drinking them. Ginny and Harry were like that. :D



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.04 - 07:24AM Title: Chapter 3

Wel ginny and harry where still danceing around each other and ginny was the only one with the dance moves...harry will wake up soon...kutgw

Author's Response: Hi, thank you again for dropping your review. Yep, he'll find Ginny soon. Next chapter is coming soon. :)



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.01 - 10:40PM Title: Chapter 2

The only thing harry is missing is the kiss on ginny's lips at this point...kutgw

Author's Response: Yeah, right. He hasn't recognized Ginny as his special yet. :)



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.02.01 - 04:02PM Title: Chapter 2

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Somehow I had the impression that the two of them were already together in Harry's fourth year, when they pretended to played Quidditch in the middle of the night. Why did they break-up before Harry's fifth year?

The story is well written, but also a wee bit confusing, at least for me.


Author's Response: I understand your thought about their ship. Harry, most of the boys are so thick to find his true feeling towards his true partner. Please enjoy the process. Harry hadn't noticed his feeling for Ginny yet at his fourth year.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.01 - 09:05AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh harry you got it bad for ginny...kutgw

Author's Response: Thank you for stopping by! I enjoy exploring Harry's mind movement at his Hogwarts days.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.02.01 - 02:45AM Title: Chapter 1

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Nice start. I'm looking forward to reading what you've further planned for this story.

Is it completely AU? Have a few canon events already happened? What's the goblin about?

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for leaving your thought. Actually, it's not completely AU. The story begins from some canon events. I added my imagination to J.K.Rowling's story. Chapter 2 is coming soon. This story will be about how Harry found his true love.



Reviewer: Lokken Signed Date: 2017.02.01 - 01:32AM Title: Chapter 1

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